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A Lonely Heart

i think about you so much every morning i told her everything would be ok i was wrong,i was scared all those times. i didn't want to show it you gave the strength,you was happy with me. even though our hearts will change forever even though were alone. along the way you and i will wait forever should we wait for the future to arrive even so our future is far away,i want me and you to be happy its just like a tear drop falling on a flower or when the sun is getting ready to rise down but our path will never change even though were so far away,i will always be there for you but when time passes over us,will you wait for me even though i will have to leave you. the choices we make is hard,saying goodbye is the thing to do. i know were torn apart,we will be together again and i will tell you how i feel about

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Date: 10/11/2009 8:33:00 AM
I have read your amazing poetry today and enjoyed it. Thank you David. I hope you are enjoying your weekend. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/10/2009 10:06:00 PM
I think the "tear drop falling on a flower" conveys a powerful emotion, David. But I hope you do not have to wait very long before you and your love are "together again." Be sure to speak up and tell her how you feel. Women are so influenced by words and many of the men I have known lack the ability or courage to express their feelings. Very heartfelt write! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 10/10/2009 1:08:00 PM
This is nice...I enjoyed reading your poem today...Marty
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Date: 10/10/2009 12:43:00 PM
Interesting write. Keep writing. Sara
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