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A Little About Me

Twenty-eight, and has lived longer than fifty Need not tell me any fairytales For I'm an author Of Many FALL Not short; For you are walking Close to the edge, and in due Time, any false move will cause damage to ALL

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Wilma Neels

Date: 7/5/2013 6:51:00 AM

Pace you say loads with a few words :) enjoy the weekend ahead :) tc Wilma

Harry Horsman

Date: 10/19/2012 7:13:00 AM

like your message here, Pace, these are wise words of philosophy, awesome...

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 8/31/2012 10:52:00 AM

This is good. I like it and I won't tell you any fairytales. You are alright in my book. Lucilla

Doreen Wright

Date: 7/30/2012 3:32:00 PM

The form, the words, the point...all wonderful!! I love this poem!!

Richard Palmer

Date: 7/15/2012 8:10:00 AM

Great write,love the shape you inspired me to do my Tree of Life,love your styles,author G "INK",the G stands for great

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/1/2012 8:11:00 AM

ha..i love your first line...your lived 28, but managed 50 = clever line.... :-) look out for that spherical journey. xox~pd

Roberlynn Jones

Date: 6/27/2012 7:52:00 AM

nice poem

Justcallme Britt

Date: 6/5/2012 10:32:00 PM

The first line seems true... I like the first upside-down pyramid... I like the following pyramid as well!!! Your not one to be messed with

Pace Ink-U-Script
Date: 6/6/2012 7:38:00 AM

Lol..too funny...Thank you Brittany!!

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 4/30/2012 1:12:00 PM

Very nice poem into your mind! I also wanted to thank you for your kind comments on my work. It is greatly appreciated. Always, Laura

Pace Ink-U-Script
Date: 4/30/2012 2:26:00 PM

Well thank you!!

Jslambert Mister Roboto

Date: 4/1/2012 4:04:00 AM

Im from the Ghetto so I'm used ta' that, look on yo muh fuggin map and find Texas and see where Houston at/ It's on the borderline of hard times..." GETO BOYS.....5th Ward...Htown Knockin boot...PeACE

Pace Ink-U-Script
Date: 4/18/2012 4:55:00 AM

Thanks for sharing your comments!!

Bertha Davis

Date: 3/24/2012 1:39:00 PM

This poem sounds sad. It made me think of my actions and how they relate to those around me.

Pace Ink-U-Script
Date: 4/18/2012 4:55:00 AM

That's good that it made you think beautiful!!!

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 3/21/2012 10:24:00 AM

So much said here..keep the pen flowing .. Charma

Pace Ink-U-Script
Date: 4/18/2012 4:56:00 AM

Thank you for sharing!!