A Leaf

Once there was a leaf, Green, green and green, With other was brave, was beautiful and ambitious. There came autumn, and cold, cold winter, Well then…………….. It turned yellow and fell down.

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Shiraz Iqbal

Date: 6/23/2013 8:21:00 PM

Short and sweet :)

Bidhu Patnaik
Date: 6/24/2013 9:53:00 AM

Thank you again.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/22/2013 11:15:00 AM

Good afternoon Bidhu, from my side of the world, to yours. a nice story about a leaf, green and lively as can be. like us, sooner then later it will fall... with all the changes the world has for this one little leaf... enjoyed..LINDA

Bidhu Patnaik
Date: 6/22/2013 11:38:00 PM

Thank you Linda..We will be green and lively forever through our expressions and our friends...always..Bidhu