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A lavender in your grey

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A lavender in your grey

If the mediterranean waves could carry me to your arms I'd wake up to your whisper enchanted by your charms If the wafting wind would breeze me to your bed Our longing lips would kiss in hungry emotions wed If this love I feel could linger in your heart If we could live our dulcet dream and never be apart If I could be with you and you could be with me We'd watch the stars at night sprinkling tranquility twinkling in secret splendour blissing our unknown destiny If we could be together till the day Forever I'd hold on to your hand be your sufficient other a lover and bestfriend I'd be your daily listener your passion,your romance I'd love you to infinity and its universal end If we could lay together on gossamer vast sands and threaded silken sheets made by the mermaid's hands We`d hear the sweetest sounds of shells and corals play I'd call out for your name and hear you answer everyday If I just turn around to find those eyes along the way If I could be with you to live the promise of today Tomorrow I'd still be there a lavender in your grey
A revised old poem of mine

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  1. Date: 9/30/2014 2:49:00 PM
    Desirably beautiful are the words you scribe Charmaine, as I've said before! You're the Princess become Queen of such poetry, James :)

  1. Date: 6/14/2014 3:08:00 PM
    It seems the waves keep bringing me back here. I hope you are having a good weekend Charmaine.

  1. Date: 4/3/2014 9:56:00 AM
    I so enjoyed reading this one again. Please let me know when you post a new one.

  1. Date: 3/16/2014 11:40:00 AM
    Finely crafted sweet-feminine love at its best, angelic and inviting:) Great stuff Charmaine!

  1. Date: 2/18/2014 8:18:00 PM
    Beautiful and very passionate.

  1. Date: 1/4/2014 10:05:00 PM
    I agree when my poet friends say you write about beauty, even when your poem is at its deepest moment... Always a Fan Charma... LINDA

  1. Date: 12/16/2013 9:16:00 AM
    A 7 Charmaine....I faded to speechless! chuck

  1. Date: 11/8/2013 10:28:00 PM
    Gossamer sands & mermaids' hands... What a lovely piece... Jack

  1. Date: 10/31/2013 5:29:00 PM
    Must be Halloween! so much gossamer going around. Very dreamy verse little one light & Love

  1. Date: 10/31/2013 12:13:00 PM
    a sweet hello to lady lavender you, charms... looking forward to your new delight..:) huggs

  1. Date: 10/30/2013 7:35:00 PM
    Stunning! I had to remind myself to breathe... You are now a favorite. Well done

  1. Date: 10/29/2013 12:08:00 PM
    Hi Charmaine, Lovely colorful write as well as romantic.. Ken

  1. Date: 10/29/2013 10:35:00 AM
    like a diamond it dazzled beauty within beyond words

  1. Date: 10/29/2013 10:15:00 AM
    Drake used the word "mesmerized", absolutely perfect description my dear Charmaine!!! But we've come to expect such beauty from your heart! Love and big hugs, Jack xoxox

  1. Date: 10/29/2013 9:39:00 AM that is perfect poetry.....

  1. Date: 10/29/2013 12:31:00 AM
    charms! charms!.. i am in love with this piece; it just sways like a sweet melody... whoot!.:) huggs

  1. Date: 10/28/2013 6:45:00 PM
    I echo the praise of the other poets. This is romance at it's best. I would change the I'll to I'd line 18 up from the bottom.

    Chircop  Avatar Charmaine Chircop
    Date: 10/28/2013 6:54:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Tnks so much Richard..I fixed it..Tnks for your support and tnks to all my friends below as well : )
  1. Date: 10/28/2013 4:37:00 PM
    This is very beautiful, I think they should hire you to write wedding vows for people, you're very good at it, hope all is well, sending you hugs xxx

  1. Date: 10/28/2013 4:18:00 PM
    what a great revision of your glorious poem, Charma. and thanks for telling me about your sweet dog. Was it Binda you said? That Apollo I wrote of was not really my dog. My friend told me how the sky changed to gold when they made a funeral for Apollo and so I wrote the lines of the poem as if I were my friend!

  1. Date: 10/28/2013 3:30:00 PM
    I am so deeply mesmerized by this. Such powerful longing & want. I can't imagine what inspires your heart to scream into the sky like this writing did. Incredible.