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A Kiss In the Pouring Rain

A kiss in the night, in the pouring rain She knows real passion, makes me quite insane I love the romance that she exhibits Blowing me away into little bits Each part of me still burns with loving awe I kiss her back by, I do grab and maw Exploring every part of her body I enjoy the awesome sensuality As the rain pours our hearts meld into one Our heart beats, blood’s rushing, nothing is gone We blend, our flesh slides, we find utter heights Flying higher than those grand, massive kites I kiss her in the night under the rain Our love will last always, it will remain Russell Sivey

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Farhana Akter

Date: 5/19/2014 12:30:00 PM

Nice

Len Gasun

Date: 2/28/2014 9:15:00 AM

Wow! This is a very impressive sonnet my very dear friend Russell. Hand salute for this outstanding poem of yours my dear friend. Super love it. Thank you so much for sharing. I want to read more but my internet is getting so slow. So, i'll come back soon ok. TYTYSM for everything! More blessings and have a wonderful wkend ahead with your family/love ones. Good night. love lots and biggest hugs, Leonora

Jack Horne

Date: 2/27/2014 2:51:00 PM

beautiful passionate write, my friend. Hadn't realised it was so long since my last Soup visit

Nette Onclaud

Date: 2/27/2014 10:25:00 AM

ohh i'll have to give this a grade of A for awesome sensuality, russell... you sizzle even in the rain... fantastic job!.. huggs

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/27/2014 5:59:00 AM

Well, I don't know if kissing in the rain would be romantic or not..Maybe in the summer when the rain felt cooling. ..Interesting work..If for a contest should do well..Thanks for stopping by my work "Reverberates"..It is back down to 26 this morning..I don't know if the blooms and buds and birds made it through the night..It is to be like that again tomorrow night then back up warmer again but still almost freezing range..Thanks for the kind remarks..Sara

Kayod5 Kayode

Date: 2/27/2014 5:30:00 AM

Nice as usual Russell the explorer,how I wish I could find a field to explore while rain goes on,I wish to love.Brilliant.

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 2/27/2014 4:58:00 AM

a wonderful sonnet Russell full of hot passion expertly written hugs

Tiaua M Ioane

Date: 2/27/2014 3:58:00 AM

How romantic and beautiful ! yes you must keep that love alive. It's so describtive it should be x-rated - I love it, thanks for sharing. Tiaua.