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A Kind and Gentle Man

I had a dream that I walked behind a man in white cloth - so gentle, so kind; he told me his name with his fatherly voice and asked me to follow, though it was my choice He talked in stories which made me think while he told large crowds to take of his drink; he walked among beggars, cripples, and thieves and he only asked us that we all just believe I watched his miracles bring back the dead and I wept as they shoved thorns upon his head; I watched him be beaten, spit on and cursed and the day he died the clouds rained with a burst I cried because I had lost my very dear friend although, he told me that it was not the end; I didn't understand this man, this begotten son was the way to eternal life for me and everyone I walked alone without him there and felt so lonely because my soul did care; this gentle man they did kill for me so that I could live on and really be free When I awoke from my dream I had a plan to live my life, to be a better man; for what I learned from this only one is that He is truly God's only son I know my friend will always be even at times when I can't always see; for my life is lost without the One... a kind and gentle man we call The Son.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/23/2012 6:56:00 PM
This poem was written from an interesting point of view. Well done
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Date: 4/24/2011 8:39:00 AM
Congrats on your poem winning on What Easter means to Me. Have a Happy Easter. God Bless love phyl
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Date: 4/23/2011 12:40:00 PM
wow, george... you describe this so weel; what a gem! congrats on the big win! :) huggs
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Date: 4/22/2011 10:52:00 AM
Great to see you worthy poem honored at the top of the winner's circle, George. Congratulations on your first place. Agape, Moses
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Date: 4/21/2011 9:08:00 PM
Big congrats on your win, dear friend. Happy Easter! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/21/2011 8:08:00 PM
Congrats George on your awesome first place win in What Easter Means to Me contest .. exciting entry with elegant words my friend.. wishing u a most blessed and very Happy Easter celebration..luv..
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Date: 4/5/2011 9:48:00 AM
oh so true a touching piece you wrote, that is what Easter is about. thank you for reading the cellar door and for your comment.
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Date: 3/22/2011 11:06:00 PM
this is the kind of Easter poem I like to see, George. Down to earth and easy for everyone to relate to. I much enjoyed.
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Date: 3/20/2011 11:49:00 AM
Oh, George, you have brought the love and wisdom of Jesus to the forefront in this amazing poem. I have been stumped trying to write on this theme in first person, but you took me on a journey I will never forget. The world has never known a more "kind and gentle 'man'" than Christ. Surely this will be a winner in Gwendolen's contest! Love and best wishes for success, Carolyn
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