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A journey to a world of fantasy

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A journey to a world of fantasy

Accompanied by a heavenly choir chant I dance. Shortly divided from the world of silence. I dance and dance, along with other lonely souls. An absolute veneration for the creator of joy and sorrows. Despite the sole of my feet bleed, I stay careless. And the exquisiteness of the red ornamented my flesh. I can feel the insistence of happiness to gain. As of being hypnotized, I ignore the pain. Oh there is life more life in this fantasy. Life that a poet could only manifest in his reverie. Fortunate, grieved, splendid, dreadful. A life that's full.

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  1. Date: 6/17/2013 4:27:00 PM
    well crafted entry... You can be sure of one thing...... This will not be the last entry of yours that I read.... Congratulations and hugs are in order.... Jake

    Candy Avatar Shirley Candy
    Date: 6/17/2013 5:52:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for the kind words, John. I've read some of your poems too and they were lovely..!! will surely giving your page more visits and comments.. ;)
  1. Date: 6/17/2013 12:01:00 PM
    Hi Shirley, ~CONGRATULATIONS~ thank you for taking your time and entering my contest. Luv* SKAT

    Candy Avatar Shirley Candy
    Date: 6/17/2013 5:30:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you for appreciating my poem, Skat.. Dozen love for you too.. ^_^
  1. Date: 6/10/2013 2:45:00 PM
    I think this is the true definition of life. Embracing all the pros & cons, the strengths & flaws, the good & the bad, yet still waking up with a smile on your face and being able to walk on. Wonderfully put together!

    Candy Avatar Shirley Candy
    Date: 6/10/2013 7:45:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I'm so flattered by your comment, Drake. Kind as always..Many thanks..! *hug* :))