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A Journey

As we travel along with a heart full of song, We've a dream that hangs on a rope; Like a lantern of light, shining at night, She shines on the fair dwelling called hope. The arms of time roll round as we climb, And our youth fades fast with the years; With a soul grown numb, with sorrows we come, Back to the valley of tears. Still forward we press with faults to confess, With hearts that need much repair; Where glistening gleams on soft sunbeams, Shines on a world of despair. All lives need change but the heart can estrange, A soul from the Father above; And reviling the rod administered by God, Brings chastening He calls Love.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 3/26/2013 1:01:00 PM
Yes! All the questions one has as one gets older. I believe it is rare that a person can call himself/herself right with God after all the follies of youth and middle age. The chastening is easily recalled by us old codgers. Call it karma? I'm still trying to figure it out. Love, Dave
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Date: 9/16/2011 2:11:00 PM
Love this poem Elizabeth, I can relate to it.Life is a never ending battle of emotions. Carol x
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Date: 9/11/2011 6:18:00 AM
another inspiring rhyme from your vibrant pen elizabeth! one day me and you shall join a journey in rhyme together, or have we already: ) ???
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Date: 9/10/2011 11:25:00 AM
Beautiful spiritual piece, my friend, with a wise message
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Date: 9/8/2011 9:56:00 PM
Interesting, deep insight, sweet feeling, lovely write. Loved it and enjoyed it. Thanks for your comment on my poem. bl
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Date: 9/8/2011 4:55:00 AM
"SENSATIONAL!" The topic is very interesting, and I enjoyed your rhymes all the way through.
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Date: 9/8/2011 12:11:00 AM
Beautiful Elizabeth!!!It sounds like words to my words......with love.....<3
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Date: 9/7/2011 9:55:00 PM
Smile, *^_^* “My Heart Is Stirred Deeply By This Sincere, True, Beautiful & Inspiring Verse My Dear Precious & Priceless, Blessed & Beautiful Elizabeth! *^_^* I Believe The Psalmist Once Wrote, Through `The Holy Spirit of GOD` *^_^* `If In This Life Tis Our Only Hope, Then Let Us Eat, Drink & Be Merry, For Tomorrow We Die` *^_^* Yet What HE Was Truly Saying Was, Let Not Your Precious Hearts Be Troubled, For I Have Prepared A Place In Heaven for You So, Come Unto Me & I Shall Set You Free *^_^* Somewhat In Line With The Muse of This Beautiful Poem I Would Say, My Dear *^_^* A Fave, to Set Upon A Crowned Pedestal &, Thank You, For Your Treasures Sweet & Touching Com *^_^* Twas Lovely & Music to The Loving Heart!” === My Love Unto Your Rare Beauty, Always & Forever, Jasper *
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Date: 9/7/2011 9:42:00 PM
Wonderful write lovely Lady Elizabeth and ever so true...thanks for your kind comments on my poems much appreciated...with love.......old Jack
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Date: 9/7/2011 9:14:00 PM
Elisabeath, You know the rhyme scheme here looks strangely familiar!:) They say that imatation is the purest form of flattery, and let me tell you that flattery will win you a fan at my house. Again you've written a wonderful poem. This rhyme scheme IS very difficult and shows great tallent to achieve. You do have a few verses that are off a little but still, good job!
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Date: 9/7/2011 8:37:00 PM
Very well written and good flow. You give a lot of strength to your opinion as a wordsmith!
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Date: 9/7/2011 8:18:00 PM
Enjoyed reading this one..God does chasten those that are his children..It is not any fun when it happens..Enjoyed reading this eve..Thanks for the comments about my work Pinnacle..Sara
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Date: 9/7/2011 7:28:00 PM
A very well done rhyming verse. I like this one.
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Date: 9/7/2011 6:38:00 PM
Very well done rhyme. Thanks for reading and commenting. Love, Joyce
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Date: 9/7/2011 4:32:00 PM
The road, it does wind through the years in our mind. And our hearts take a ride with our feeling's kept inside. If we showed them, we would not know where to go. For the journey is the best the world will show. When you get to where your going. Be glad the rivers flowing. It's a sign that life goes on and on. And when the sun does set, tomorrow, don't forget. Clear blue or cloudy gray, there will be another day. And God will be there in a brand new dawn.
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Date: 9/7/2011 2:42:00 PM
a great spiritual lift, elize.... a pleasure to read your flowing song today! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 9/7/2011 10:39:00 AM
Life is a journey. We don't all take the same path, but we all have a journey to make. An interesting piece...the rhyming pattern reminds me of some of Longfellow's poems. Well done. xoxo Robert.
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Date: 9/7/2011 10:11:00 AM
well done EW....TAH
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Date: 9/7/2011 9:40:00 AM
Well put betty
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