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Below is the poem entitled A Jar of Olives in Brine which was written by poet
Kaur. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.
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A jar of olives in brine…?...
Add zinger or a puncline,
Let your juicy thoughts trickle,
Let your tangy wit tickle.
The title too must be fine.