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A Hummingbird

A Hummingbird I’m like the breeze blowing light across the world Just take a look at me, I may resemble a hummingbird My little fluttering wings, sings so fluently with sweetness so fair Cannot you visualize I may be seen as a fresh breath of air If you could see the swelling of my beauty of breast, they’re lavish colored feathers Singing to our loved parents their vibrant colors which ours or lightened feathers I’m like the breeze blowing light across the world Just take a look at me, I may resemble a hummingbird. Written: Aug. 21, 2015

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Date: 8/28/2015 10:58:00 PM
To me, how lovely it has occurred, All of the beauty of a humming bird, Having always a continuous motion, And also full of love and devotion. Theresa in poetic knowledge so wise See hummingbird fly through skies Up into eternity and cannot find For it has left us all far behind. Yet he still waits for us each there, With beauty which is beyond compare, With wings beating as they persist My humming bird will be sorely missed. Jim Horn
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James Horn
Date: 8/29/2015 8:36:00 AM
Which is my wife of course.
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Theresa Cw
Date: 8/29/2015 12:25:00 AM
Sorry to hear that, these beautiful birds have the most gracious continuous as you say motion. I feel like they are quite like poetry in motion. Your beautiful hummingbird will always be in your beautiful heart.... Take care and sweet dreams James..... Theresa
Date: 8/21/2015 8:10:00 PM
simply wonderful imagery Theresa I would love to see a hummingbird in real life:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 8/22/2015 12:18:00 AM
Thank you so very much Jan for your comment and the wonderful imagery. They are such exquisite birds. Mom has them always at her place.... hugs Theresa

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