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A House Neglected

House me not on beds of orchids Orchids though fragrant can wither, Wither on yards dried from neglect Neglect, though, ruins heart’s dwelling. 6. 07.2015 Four Lines Only, for Nette Onclaud Visual 4 Manny Pizon

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Date: 6/14/2015 3:24:00 PM
Hello Manny, congratulations on the spot achieved Manny''
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Date: 6/12/2015 7:47:00 PM
Manny, Congratulations on your 4 line win. Hugs SKAT
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Date: 6/12/2015 6:21:00 PM
Good write, Manny! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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Date: 6/12/2015 3:20:00 PM
I do like your interpretation of the visual but My orchids flower for at least 8 months lol :-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 6/10/2015 12:49:00 AM
What a fabulous piece, it extremely interesting and enjoyable, excellent write Manny.......A.M.
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