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A Horse Story

there was a horse he was standing on course he was standing at the gate thinking he was late i asked if i could get him so we went in and saw kim there was already a girl buying so i started crying then i said ... solong pony i will be lonely

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 6/28/2011 1:59:00 PM
Brooke, Cool to see a great poem in the winner circle. Agape, Moses
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Date: 6/24/2011 5:32:00 AM
CONGRATS BROOKE!!! VERY GOOD POEM YOU WROTE HERE, SO CREATIVE, AND NICE USE OF WORDS, LOVE YA SIS, Randa Bear
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Date: 6/23/2011 8:55:00 PM
HI, Brooke. What a cute ending so long pony I will be lonely. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 6/23/2011 5:28:00 PM
Great work..Congrats...Sara
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Date: 6/23/2011 5:10:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Brooke. Excellent piece. Nice going. Ralph
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Date: 6/23/2011 2:08:00 PM
Congrats Brooke on your excellent win in the horse contest with this exciting entry luv.. enjoy.. for great poetry ...
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Date: 6/23/2011 12:42:00 PM
Congratulations and thank you for supporting my contest Brooke. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/16/2011 2:50:00 PM
Creative and meaningful expressions, brooke
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