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a horse story

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a horse story


there was a horse
he was standing on course

                                he was standing at the gate
                                thinking he was late

                                                          i asked if i could get him
                                                          so we went in and saw kim

                                           there was already a girl buying 
                                         so i started crying
         then i said ...

                              solong pony
                          i will be lonely

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  1. Date: 6/28/2011 1:59:00 PM
    Brooke, Cool to see a great poem in the winner circle. Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 6/24/2011 5:32:00 AM
    CONGRATS BROOKE!!! VERY GOOD POEM YOU WROTE HERE, SO CREATIVE, AND NICE USE OF WORDS, LOVE YA SIS, Randa Bear

  1. Date: 6/23/2011 8:55:00 PM
    HI, Brooke. What a cute ending so long pony I will be lonely. Congrats on your win.

  1. Date: 6/23/2011 5:28:00 PM
    Great work..Congrats...Sara

  1. Date: 6/23/2011 5:10:00 PM
    Congrats on your win, Brooke. Excellent piece. Nice going. Ralph

  1. Date: 6/23/2011 2:08:00 PM
    Congrats Brooke on your excellent win in the horse contest with this exciting entry luv.. enjoy.. for great poetry ...

  1. Date: 6/23/2011 12:42:00 PM
    Congratulations and thank you for supporting my contest Brooke. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 6/16/2011 2:50:00 PM
    Creative and meaningful expressions, brooke