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A Hopeless Cause

A foreign feeling fuels fear, gnawing at the heart of the beast. And love's exquisite, searing flame is painfully consuming him. Love has infected his being, boring a hole into his heart. Yet, cringing on the fringe of dark, evil contorts his blackened soul. Captivated by her beauty, he squirms, writhing in agony. And seeks hope in a hopeless cause, craving her, despite all his flaws. Reaching within, he grabs his heart and rips it out; to ease his hurt. Smitten by love, he lies bereft, for the pangs of passion persist. (Blank Verse) 5/10/2015

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Date: 2/27/2018 12:03:00 PM
Beautiful imagery, Emile and I love how your first and last lines have alliterations that hit like toc toc toc. Well done.
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Date: 5/10/2015 10:23:00 PM
It's been a few years since I felt such passion . . . but your words stirred my heart . . . it made me want to howl at the moon!! Good thing it's raining tonight. Outstanding job dear friend. 7
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Date: 5/11/2015 8:47:00 AM
Thanks so much David, I appreciate it. Emile.
Date: 5/10/2015 10:07:00 PM
Oh the pangs of unrequited love!! Superb piece as always. Love the alliteration in the first and last lines. A 7
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Date: 5/11/2015 8:48:00 AM
Thanks Nandita, I appreciate it. Emile.
Date: 5/10/2015 5:41:00 PM
heartfelt write, my friend
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Date: 5/11/2015 8:49:00 AM
Thanks Jack, I appreciate it. Emile.
Date: 5/10/2015 12:27:00 PM
OH MY! Emile....this is such an amazing write of angst. Oh....I know this feeling. :( Sometimes the heart is just rebellious. A hopeless cause brings so much pain. Lovely write. My latest echoes this same refrain. Hugs
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Date: 5/10/2015 2:59:00 PM
Thanks so much Jade, for your friendly warm words of encouragement. Emile.

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