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A Hint of Africa- Contest

Zebra stripes you instantly know what animal it is, Xanthic you couldn't call it white and black are its colours. Viewing and naming an animal usually needs a certain knowledge that comes through reading and observing Stripes are more prevalent than spots on animals Remaining beasts are mostly of one colour Quite a number resemble the terrain it lies in. Perfectly camouflaged, on a hot day most animals lie in the shade. Natures way of keeping cool is a dip in the waterhole Many become victims of a hiding crocodile. Lying under the water in wait for the thirsty. Killing them in its massive jaws Just the same for humans who take the risk, I wouldn't be that brave. However the young animals find going without water a killer. For they can't just pop a can as they need everyday occurrence for you and I. Dangers lurk everywhere in the bush Careful now as you go Beautiful beasts everywhere Africa where danger is a way of life Penned 2 October 2015

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Date: 10/2/2015 3:37:00 PM
Great ABC Seren-- you captured the Animal Kingdom well...but just so you know.. Africa has fallen off the "must" list because of its corrupted human inhabitants... who kill the beautiful wildlife there -- a total lack of morality unfortunately ~~X~~
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Kim Van Breda
Date: 10/3/2015 8:35:00 AM
Hi Seren .. just to say that I didn't mean for you to change your poem :) just a thought I had on the reality of life in Africa, but yes... your new ending is probably more realistic and still great xx
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Seren Roberts
Date: 10/2/2015 11:14:00 PM
Changed the end, is that better....?
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Seren Roberts
Date: 10/2/2015 11:08:00 PM
Thanks Kim hmm yes I know, but it sort of fitted, don't fancy re-writing it....Seren
Date: 10/2/2015 10:05:00 AM
You did a good job! I generally don't like this form as it seems so forced..but yours came out quite well! BG
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Seren Roberts
Date: 10/2/2015 11:09:00 PM
Thanks BG I did try to make it flow....Seren

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