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A Hidden Truth~

behind demure mask hides one volatile temper~ offend cautiously

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Jayne Eggins

Date: 10/1/2010 5:35:00 AM

Congrates on having your poem featured this week Patricia ... I had to grin at the last line ... wonderful Haiku with a different flavour love Jayne

Skat A

Date: 9/29/2010 8:41:00 AM

PATRICIA, CoNGRATULATIoNS oN HAVING YoUR PoEM FEATURED THIS WEEK*luv~SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/29/2010 8:35:00 AM

Hello! Patricia, CONGRATULATIONS on your wonderful poem being featured this week. Enjoyed the selection of all the poetry on the front page. Have yourself a nice and wonderful day,..p.d."

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/27/2010 6:51:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Patricia. Love, Carol

Francine Roberts

Date: 9/26/2010 5:29:00 PM

love it, congrats on having it featured this week

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/22/2010 3:26:00 PM

There are a lot of people with short fuses, Patricia. All we can do is try our best to avoid them. Very intriguing and compelling haiku. Love, Carolyn

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/22/2010 3:15:00 PM

Well expressed thoughts with nice images, Patricia

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/22/2010 12:45:00 PM

Wise words Patricia... tread lightly too when a person has a fast temper... my family is full blooded Italian so those tempers flare often...but we still all luv... enjoyed with luv..

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 9/22/2010 11:48:00 AM

am I walking on eggshell? LOL so true of an observation.