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A Heavy Hand

As the fog settles in the vale thick, heavy white as snow Like a blanket resting in place But mad Mockingbirds row Barnyard Swallows check out realestate As tender oak leaves shine The dampness penetrates Fog coats thoughts and all that's mine Confusion rides upon the air That stillness conveys fear What is coming in the quiet Is a violent storm near? A heavy hand seems to pressure Weighs down my peace of mind There's a sun hidden behind clouds Feelings there undefined Maybe the sense that there'll be many Left behind, soon saved gone Satan will come in His full power Terror will start to dawn Earth has seen nothing so severe Three and one-half years pass Then horror will reign here even Earth will bear many carcass unfinished

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 4/14/2015 10:06:00 AM
discrete, lovely, incisive, well crafted and beautifully portrayed. I am happy to come across this wonderful piece....
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Date: 4/9/2015 8:02:00 AM
HI, Sara thanks for dropping by, and thanks for the comment. Love, Love, your poem. #7
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Date: 4/8/2015 1:17:00 PM
Definitely something to think about; not dwell on, but think about...you must finish it sometime.
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Date: 4/8/2015 12:14:00 PM
- A truly wonderful poem, dear Sara !!! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/8/2015 7:50:00 AM
An insightful write on the prophesied Rapture. Waiting for the complete version, dear Sara. A 7. Blessings! Kim :)
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Date: 4/8/2015 2:33:00 AM
Excellent. Very strong write. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs
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Date: 4/7/2015 10:32:00 PM
A great write my friend. Hope to read the finished poem soon. Revelations is a scary book, but people need to know that evil will reap havoc for a time.
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