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A Heart Too Weak To Live

Complicated loss, confound in between reasons, my affection died in truth, my dreams have been crossed, I'm stuck on earth with grievance, what's a lonely wife to do? days fly by...and by... dear husband, he found his death, with a heart too weak to live, eyes too wet they're dry, seeing him take his last breath, now I'm the one left deprived. Your for seen outcome, couldn't prepare me enough, killed by attack of the heart, your life has succumb, why you lived a life so rough, not deserving one so hard. I'll see tomorrow, just like I saw yesterday, trying to stay positive, future of sorrow, true love died that Saturday, why am I the one to live? Written By: Laura Loo Date Written: February 21, 2016

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Date: 2/21/2016 2:16:00 PM
We can never be prepared for the death of a loved one. So sad and I felt the sorrow through your words. Well written :)
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Lu Loo
Date: 2/21/2016 4:01:00 PM
Thank you Carol...(soupmail) :)-luloo
Date: 2/21/2016 10:22:00 AM
Oh Dear....what a heart wrenching write. You tugged at my heart. This just be a fictitious write, but it seems so...real. Hugs, dear.
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Lu Loo
Date: 2/21/2016 10:31:00 AM
Thank you very much Eileen..:)-luloo

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