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Simple and Consistent Truths

Disregarding time and circumstance, we must acknowledge ourselves as a series of simple and consistent truths, each one its own narrative of raw emotion. With this clairvoyance comes epochal responsibility, moral obligation at its best, yet we are weeping, soul to soul, as I barter with gods for any truth that does not discriminate. Great truth provides only clear and finite directive, free of judgment... a means to an end. The truth does not ebb and flow in recognition of ones ancestry or genetic profile. It cannot be adjusted to maintain societies distorted analysis of ones successes and failures alike. Great truth governs all living things and the energies connecting them. Justice. A quick blink of an eye and I'm dreaming. The colors are plucked from the vast waters surrounding me; Vanish! My very own magic show. Then almost as quickly as the colors disappeared, each piece of my world is replaced with variants of black and white, the most cautious of shades, and just like that I am erased from my own masterpiece. A man speaks to me and I know that he alone could change my world; he reaches my hand as the swells take me under, and I have to ask the gods why they chose me. They remind me of the fire in my heart. Silence falls on me like a blanket and I hear them say "Boldly become the change you wish to see and let this truth be your courage, your faith, and your anchor." I lead my head back to my heart continuing to search for the greatest truth within my spirit. The gods speak to me, no more. His hands reach for me, no more. My pulse flutters at the sight of my own reflection. See, I've not shed a tear, yet still I can feel them, rolling over my cheeks to the corners of my mouth, I can taste the salt of each droplet, another soul, to drown here in my ocean. This storm in my heart and my head never ends, in his arms, waters still, and the tides rage no more. To stay there would be true peace of mind for myself. What would come of the damned that I heal off the shore? He swore my spirits the one most worth saving, promised never to cry for the hero in me. His hope was to keep me from tides strong and graving, But I'm home in that deepest dark place of the sea... Created by gods, my entire life's purpose, And the only most loneliest place I can be. My darkness is light, always misunderstood. My sorrow heals others. I set myself free.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 10/17/2016 2:04:00 AM
Avalon, it felt so good to read your poem. so much deep reflections. enjoyed a lot.
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Date: 10/11/2016 3:43:00 PM
I enjoyed the deep flow of your piece, Avalon. Congrats for having your poem featured in the Poetrysoup homepage!!! ;-)
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Date: 9/15/2016 11:25:00 PM
Avalon, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT
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Date: 9/16/2016 8:33:00 PM
Thank you! I appreciate the encouragement in this group especially since it's been so long since I've had the courage to put my words out there for anyone. I haven't written anything in over ten years before now. I'm so excited!
Date: 9/14/2016 2:39:00 PM
Great, thoughtful piece you have written here. enjoyed your reflections in this poem
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Date: 9/16/2016 8:33:00 PM
Thank you! I appreciate the encouragement in this group especially since it's been so long since I've had the courage to put my words out there for anyone. I haven't written anything in over ten years before now. I'm so excited!
Date: 9/13/2016 4:30:00 PM
Thank you, each of you, for your support. This is actually the first piece I've written in literally a decade and I shared my original draft, merely my thoughts put on paper as I am learning to live with my sensitivity to a number of things. After ten years of medications that did not work I finally see that there's nothing wrong with me as I am retraining my gifts and talents to fit my lifestyle. I do appreciate the encouragement. Thanks again. I hope there will be much more to come from me!
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Date: 9/13/2016 3:32:00 PM
WOW, what a read, Avalon,Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 9/16/2016 8:35:00 PM
Thank you! I appreciate the encouragement in this group especially since it's been so long since I've had the courage to put my words out there for anyone. I haven't written anything in over ten years before now. I'm so excited! I don't really know how to navigate the site and follow people but I just posted my second piece which was quickly written outside while I watched the moon come over my garage waiting for the dog to do his business lol. Oddly I'm in love with what that ten minutes under the moon pulled out of my head.
Date: 9/13/2016 11:26:00 AM
Many fantastic lines. I like its tone. Really enjoyed, "the most cautious of shades." I do think some trimming would sharpen the imagery. Welcome to Soup!
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