A Gun

They say kill the bad thoughts and feelings, but they're all concealed in your head? So,do you blow your brains out and hope that your scattered insides contain the impure thoughts?...purge yourself with a gun?...

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Darren White

Date: 2/18/2017 12:45:00 PM

yep, been there done that.... isn't it horrible? write it down, that's what I do, and so do you apparently. It's good, so raw and rough, so very good.

Mike Hauser

Date: 1/20/2017 8:37:00 AM

Powerful piece!

Tricia Campese
Date: 1/20/2017 10:10:00 AM

Thank you!!

John Fleming

Date: 1/12/2017 11:22:00 AM

Wow...Powerful write, Tricia - This is really gritty stuff! All my best...And may your New Year be a fulfilling and contented one! :) john P.s Reminds me of Sylvia Plath.

Tricia Campese
Date: 1/12/2017 12:13:00 PM

Thank you so much! :)