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On a High Cliff

I stand on a high cliff, my long raven hair is blowing in the wild wind and my dress of red presses to the curves of my body. A green ribbon from my hair is sailing away over the ocean, but I am anchored to this place - I carry a heavy, dragging weight that is an immense burden in my life, how I wish that I could break the chains that hold me and like my green ribbon sail away over the ocean, that I could be like a bird drifting over blue waves; Oh, I would like to explore the world on a sailing ship- upon the deep blue with no shores in sight, that would be so lovely to see the white billowing sails. I wish and dream to be ruled by the winds that blow, not the heavy burdens of life. __________________ November 28, 2016 Poetry/Verse/On A High Cliff Copyright Protected, ID 16-853-641-02 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Submitted to Contest 243 sponsor, Brian Strand Fourth Place

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Date: 12/24/2016 9:50:00 AM
""I wish and dream to be ruled by the winds that blow, not the heavy burdens of life."" This poem is a gem and expresses the desires so many seek when facing the harshness of this cold, dark world ! MERRY CHRISTMAS TO YOU AND YOURS!
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Date: 12/4/2016 3:59:00 PM
wow, love the metaphor of the flowing ribbon to show freedom. We all want that, dear. FAVE and big congrats.
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Date: 12/2/2016 3:32:00 PM
A most poignant piece Constance. Congratulations on your placement...
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Date: 11/28/2016 7:12:00 PM
Such honest longing. I understand it. I wish I could put it to poetry as you do.
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Date: 11/28/2016 6:05:00 PM
Hi. I can identify with 'burdens' completely and the thoughts of freedom, as you describe. Very well done.
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Date: 11/28/2016 5:58:00 PM
Only you can break the chains that bind you my friend... maybe not now but in the future it will happen:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 11/28/2016 5:41:00 PM
This feels so agonizing and desperate my friend but those chains may someday be broken, setting you free to go after your dreams. In fact, I'm sure that will happen. Your beautiful but sad poem tells me there is an inner desire that will win out.
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