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A Good French Poem

A Good French Poem I’m tall, lovely, Black and Brunette. I’m good not petite. Happy and healthy. Strong person. Whole person. Like a whole apple, I can eat…

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Ovidiu Bocsa

Date: 4/6/2016 10:14:00 AM

Life and love like an apple...Wonderful imagery.Congrat

Ayesha Karim
Date: 4/6/2016 3:24:00 PM

Thank you.

Val Brooklyn Rogers Blk Panther

Date: 3/25/2015 5:05:00 PM

This is good fresh and compact. I'm going to read more of your material s o you can stop by and read some more of mine. LIVE A LUCKY LAVANDER LIFE. VB Rogers

Ayesha Karim
Date: 3/25/2015 5:08:00 PM

What do you mean? I don't have a lucky life. What is a lucky life to you?

Deborah Shiells

Date: 5/5/2014 12:19:00 PM

Hi Ayesha, Loved this write! Powerful and true. Thanks so much for sharing this write with us here. Peace, Deborah

Ayesha Karim
Date: 7/20/2014 9:11:00 PM

I'm beaming that you loved my poem! I'm so happy to be a Souper. I really am. It's amazing how many great comments I get from strangers who like my work.

Robert Rogers

Date: 2/14/2014 11:36:00 AM

Un bon poème français Je suis grande, belle, noire et brune. Je suis bon pas petite. Heureux et en santé. Personne forte. Personne à part entière. Comme une pomme entière, je peux manger ... Nice whimsy...smile//Sinclair

Ayesha Karim
Date: 3/30/2014 8:48:00 PM

Merci.

Karl Marszalowicz

Date: 7/31/2013 6:01:00 PM

I like the fiber of this poem I feel it should have been longer I doubt you expressed your entire beautiful character in these words.

Ayesha Karim
Date: 7/31/2013 7:17:00 PM

This is a short poem. I've written many longer poems and I want to write a prose poem that's several pages but short poems can be good and still be short. Thank you about what you said about my character. Thank you so much.

Varsha Tomar

Date: 7/11/2013 12:00:00 PM

The last line is like a cherry on the cake. Like a whole apple I can eat...WOW!! Enjoyed it!

Ayesha Karim
Date: 7/12/2013 7:14:00 AM

I'm so glad you liked my poems.

Cherie Thomas

Date: 7/4/2013 8:50:00 AM

I hear you ayesha!!! Now thats a good french poem lol the best way to be is who we are!!! Love it. Thanks4sharing......Cheriex

Ayesha Karim
Date: 7/4/2013 3:13:00 PM

I'm glad you liked my poem. Thanks for commenting!