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A Good French Poem

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A Good French Poem

A Good French Poem



I’m tall, lovely, Black and Brunette.
I’m good not petite.
Happy and healthy.
Strong person.
Whole person.
Like a whole apple, I can eat…

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  1. Date: 5/5/2014 12:19:00 PM
    Hi Ayesha, Loved this write! Powerful and true. Thanks so much for sharing this write with us here. Peace, Deborah

    Karim Avatar Ayesha Karim
    Date: 7/20/2014 9:11:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I'm beaming that you loved my poem! I'm so happy to be a Souper. I really am. It's amazing how many great comments I get from strangers who like my work.
  1. Date: 2/14/2014 11:36:00 AM
    Un bon poème français Je suis grande, belle, noire et brune. Je suis bon pas petite. Heureux et en santé. Personne forte. Personne à part entière. Comme une pomme entière, je peux manger ... Nice whimsy...smile//Sinclair

    Karim Avatar Ayesha Karim
    Date: 3/30/2014 8:48:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Merci.
  1. Date: 7/31/2013 6:01:00 PM
    I like the fiber of this poem I feel it should have been longer I doubt you expressed your entire beautiful character in these words.

    Karim Avatar Ayesha Karim
    Date: 7/31/2013 7:17:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    This is a short poem. I've written many longer poems and I want to write a prose poem that's several pages but short poems can be good and still be short. Thank you about what you said about my character. Thank you so much.
  1. Date: 7/11/2013 12:00:00 PM
    The last line is like a cherry on the cake. Like a whole apple I can eat...WOW!! Enjoyed it!

    Karim Avatar Ayesha Karim
    Date: 7/12/2013 7:14:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I'm so glad you liked my poems.
  1. Date: 7/4/2013 8:50:00 AM
    I hear you ayesha!!! Now thats a good french poem lol the best way to be is who we are!!! Love it. Thanks4sharing......Cheriex

    Karim Avatar Ayesha Karim
    Date: 7/4/2013 3:13:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I'm glad you liked my poem. Thanks for commenting!