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A Girls Night Out

A girls night out,guys,can be quite a drag, Going on a prom date,walk with a sleeping bag, To show off your date,to boast and brag, Sit patiently on the coach,like a good little lad,,, A girls night out,can be quite a scare, Searching the closet,for what cloths to wear, Hours in front the mirror,fixing face and hair, One smudge on her nails,she screams in fear,,, A girls night out,can be so sweet, Well put together,she looking cute,you looking neat, Silky in your arms,and light on her feet, Goodnight kiss on your cheek,races your heart beat,,, A girls night out,doesn't always,ends in a bang, When the girl you take out,dad,is the towns hangman, Return the kiss on her cheek,a squeeze of her hand, Goodnight Mr.Palmer,I brought her home before one,,, Darren Watson contest,,,, ,,,A Girls night Out,,,

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Sally Eslinger

Date: 1/22/2022 5:40:00 AM

Sweet, fun. So that is a guy’s view!? Hmmmm.

Richard Palmer
Date: 1/22/2022 11:39:00 AM

lol, now you know

Seosamh De Burca

Date: 5/8/2016 2:02:00 PM

lol I enjoyed the father threat in your poem. Like the vision and comedy you use in your work well done.

Richard Palmer
Date: 9/11/2017 2:28:00 PM

Thank you

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/25/2014 6:31:00 PM

anytime

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/18/2014 3:00:00 PM

thank you for the reply..PD

Richard Palmer
Date: 7/25/2014 2:32:00 PM

you're welcome PD,,,

Weston Gregory

Date: 6/21/2014 6:44:00 AM

ha ha we fathers for you... guess to her its all fun...very funny piece

Richard Palmer
Date: 6/26/2014 6:49:00 AM

thanks Weston,you know us good Jamaican fathers,very protective when it comes to our girls

Donna Jones

Date: 6/19/2014 11:40:00 AM

Ahh...such a sweet poem....very well written..and congrats

Richard Palmer
Date: 6/26/2014 6:47:00 AM

thank you very much Donna,oxox

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/9/2014 9:35:00 AM

RICHARD, Congratulations, on your awesome winning poem... LUV -LINDA-

Richard Palmer
Date: 6/26/2014 6:46:00 AM

thanks much Linda,oxox

Carma Sanderson

Date: 6/4/2014 1:51:00 PM

Great write,,, Richie congrats on the win,,, xoxo baby,,,

Richard Palmer
Date: 6/4/2014 6:34:00 PM

thank you Carma,oxox

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/4/2014 12:48:00 AM

Interesting write, congrats on the win, richard

Richard Palmer
Date: 6/4/2014 11:15:00 AM

thanks Doc,you have some very interesting write on your page too,love your poetry

Jadazzle United

Date: 6/2/2014 9:00:00 AM

Excellent poem Richard with a very clear message. good luck in the contest. hugs Jan xxx

Richard Palmer
Date: 6/4/2014 11:13:00 AM

thanks Jan,oxox Richard

Carol Eastman

Date: 5/31/2014 10:40:00 AM

A great poem for the contest... Sorry I haven't been around often lately... Have 2 kids just got home from college for the summer.

Richard Palmer
Date: 6/1/2014 12:24:00 PM

Thank you much Carol,hands full,with the joy of life,our children,full joy they will soon be grown and gone

Arlene Smith

Date: 5/27/2014 8:18:00 PM

Richard, great poem!... Also glad I read it because I entered a poem in this contest..didn't realize this was supposed to be the subject..thought it was just a name given to the contest?!?!?... I am still trying to learn my way round here!!... Lol

Richard Palmer
Date: 5/30/2014 1:22:00 PM

thank you,best wishes in the contest,you will soon catch on,lol,welcome

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 5/27/2014 7:32:00 AM

Great write - bravo!

Richard Palmer
Date: 5/27/2014 9:42:00 AM

thanks much Pandita

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/26/2014 7:53:00 AM

- A enjoyable evening for the girls - (It is the adults' responsibility to look after) - -Luck in contest, Richard ! - Have a nice day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Richard Palmer
Date: 5/26/2014 10:15:00 AM

oxox to you too Anne,happy you fulljoyed,have a wonderful day

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/26/2014 7:25:00 AM

well, we gals want fun, and this surely is an enjoyable one, richard.. huggs

Richard Palmer
Date: 5/26/2014 10:09:00 AM

thank you Nette,happy you full joyed it,,,oxox

Toquyen Harrell

Date: 5/25/2014 6:28:00 PM

Are you talking about a girl's night out or a date night, lol? Nice write, Richard. Glad the old man didn't hang ya. And you were so well behaved.:) Cute. Or am I mistaken? haha

Richard Palmer
Date: 5/25/2014 7:14:00 PM

I am the old man,Mr Palmer,lol,and my daughter date was well behave,lol,thanks Toquen