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A Girl Named Rain

She wakes up in bed smelling eggs and bacon on a hot silet.Her mother calls her''Rain''come down to eat.On her plat were three gloden eggs and two slices of bacon.Rain aet very fast knowing that she is geting two brand new horses.She thinks in her mind ,''what color whould they be?''.Her mother calls her two the car.When they get down there Rain spots two beatiful white horsesrunning in the feild.Rain told her mother that she whated the beatiful horses in the feild.Her motherwalk to the man incharge.Then Rain pushed uot her lips and made a kissing nows.The two horses ran over to her.She was think in her head ,''How cool is this?''.She started rubing on the horses`s heads. Her mother came over and said,'' how cool''.The the man came in behind and said the are all hers.Rain came home and ran out side named them sugar and cloud.Rain grow up with the horses and became a strong women who lived on a ranch. Rain,The Story

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Date: 10/21/2011 5:26:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your story..Sara
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Date: 12/25/2010 9:24:00 AM
wow how old was i when i thought like this. good T. S.
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