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A Gift From A Child

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A Gift From A Child

A small child runs on the beach
clutching a treasured gift in his hand
a sand covered dog poo
 24/09/2012

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  1. Date: 10/5/2012 5:41:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in Black Eyed Susan's "Single Senryu contest GG. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/2/2012 10:41:00 PM
    Lovely Mandy. Many congrats for this win.

  1. Date: 10/2/2012 1:19:00 PM
    MANDY, Congratulations with your awesome win in Susan's "Single Senryu" contest. ~ :-) xox~ PD

  1. Date: 10/2/2012 8:01:00 AM
    as funny as always...loved this!! congrats on ur win....:))))

  1. Date: 10/2/2012 7:53:00 AM
    way to go love this, congrats

  1. Date: 10/2/2012 6:40:00 AM
    Hahaha Mandy,Love this funny write!Congrats on your win!

  1. Date: 10/2/2012 2:52:00 AM
    OOh! what a write! Many congratulations on an awesome win with this wonderful senryu!!

  1. Date: 10/1/2012 10:38:00 PM
    hehehehe!!!!! congratulations :) well done!!!

  1. Date: 10/1/2012 9:15:00 PM
    Oh, you just made my night... I'm still laughing, well done! Congratulations on your win. Lee

  1. Date: 10/1/2012 5:58:00 PM
    Always the humorist - congratulations on your win. Basho would love this.

  1. Date: 10/1/2012 5:42:00 PM
    congrats on your win Mandy

  1. Date: 10/1/2012 4:48:00 PM
    Congrats on your winning work..Sara

  1. Date: 10/1/2012 2:20:00 PM
    This one is so funny. I remember it well. Congrats on your win.

  1. Date: 10/1/2012 1:08:00 PM
    lol..... Congratulations on your win, Mandy. Love, Suzette

  1. Date: 9/25/2012 8:31:00 PM
    hahaha, this is awesome. If it's for Susan, I just know she will like it for her contest because she has great humor.

  1. Date: 9/25/2012 5:17:00 AM
    You'd have to smile and say thank you. Kids are the joy of living and I adored your poem.

  1. Date: 9/24/2012 7:31:00 AM
    i think this may be your first, nice try, enjoyed.. soupmail

  1. Date: 9/24/2012 2:37:00 AM
    I've seen it happen, brilliant. Funny words for a rainy day, thanks. Read ;{>

  1. Date: 9/24/2012 2:10:00 AM
    Mandy, A Haiku in its correct form is about the seasons Spring, Summer etc: all others are put under the heading of Senyru, they consist of a 5-7-5 syllable count, yours will be a great story when edited a little, as it gives a fun picture, Yours Ian.T

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    Date: 9/24/2012 2:25:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you for being the one to say bless you for that i will not forget and as for the spelling I am on a new laptop different sized keys and made the error of not checking after posting