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Marooned on a tropical isle I'm captive to an angry sea. And it feels an eternity imprisoned here without a key. Loneliness saturates my heart, but the rising tide ignores me. For the waves cannot feel my pain and have no wish to set me free. I oft see a ghostly mirage, like a vision that haunts my dreams. For it appears to be so near, and yet, no one answers my screams. A tie-dyed sky's clouding over, another storm is on its way. And it's time that I sought shelter, for tomorrow might be the day. Sleep promises to rescue me but fails to take me from this place. And just as soon as my eyes close, tears start to trickle down my face. (Quatrain) 9/19/2015

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Date: 5/26/2018 7:43:00 PM
A lovely read, Emile.
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Date: 5/27/2018 7:55:00 AM
Thanks Line, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 9/19/2015 3:58:00 PM
Powerfully penned. The feelings and the fears are so well expressed. I love the imagery.
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Date: 9/19/2015 8:20:00 PM
Thank you so much Njeri, as always, I appreciate your comments. Emile.
Date: 9/19/2015 3:15:00 PM
Wow, the feelings of a stranded man are so well captured here. Nice write
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Date: 9/19/2015 8:19:00 PM
Thank you Mark, I appreciate your comments. Emile.
Date: 9/19/2015 3:15:00 PM
Emile Provocative thoughts penned here. Great idea and concept. Reality brings him back from his dreams of leaving. I wonder if any of those shipwrecked on a island experienced exactly your thoughts.
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Date: 9/19/2015 8:19:00 PM
Thank you so much Michael, I appreciate all your friendly comments. Emile.
Date: 9/19/2015 1:22:00 PM
What a sad and wonderful write Emile! What can I say more then it is just fantastic! A 7 from me!!!!!!
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Date: 9/19/2015 1:32:00 PM
Thank you so much Tammy, I appreciate your comments. Emile.

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