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A Frozen Tear

Home, a place I used to have Replaced by the solace The foreboding of winter Sends a chill deep within I hold hands with yesterday We quietly embrace Till the wind blows us free The winter has set in And now tiss only me

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Michael Tor
Date: 7/3/2022 9:51:00 PM
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Arthur your second poem, Poem Of The week honors. Impressive... I could feel that chill deep within in this seperation. Exceptional write...
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Punnia Viswan Bhatia
Date: 11/15/2015 9:09:00 AM
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loneliness is sad, but solitude is desired :) love this poem ~7~
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 11/15/2015 3:51:00 PM
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You are so sweet, thank you! :)
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Robert Nehls
Date: 6/19/2014 10:01:00 PM
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Wow, Arthur. This is a wonderful poem. So much emotion in just a few lines. I can feel the chill, the emptiness that you feel. Very well written..... Robert.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 6/19/2014 10:41:00 PM
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Thank you for your kind words, much appreciated!
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Date: 7/14/2013 12:25:00 AM
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Congratulations with your Featured Poem of the week. take care and good night :-) Hugs ~XOX~ LINDA
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Shirley Candy
Date: 7/7/2013 9:11:00 PM
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Congratz for being this week featured poem..! this such a lovely poem...nicely written... *shirley*
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 7/7/2013 9:55:00 PM
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thank you so much!!
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Jillian Veitenheimer
Date: 3/9/2013 12:23:00 AM
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I love the wording in this and how ..."wind chilled" it is. Great!
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 5/10/2015 10:18:00 PM
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Thank you, sorry for so long to answer
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Anne P. Murray
Date: 3/3/2013 8:33:00 AM
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I too hold hands with yesterday, walking alone in the thoughts and memories, wishing for one last endearing kiss. Beautiful poem, words that endear
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 11/15/2015 3:50:00 PM
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Sorry for so late reply, but thank you so much!!!!!
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Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 2/26/2013 10:00:00 AM
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'...I hold hands with yesterday, we quietly embrace,' lovely phrasing and wistful sentiment. Beautifully written! Best wishes, Keith
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 11/15/2015 3:49:00 PM
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Thanks Keith, I am embarrassed I seemed to have missed so many comments! cheers
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Seren Roberts
Date: 2/24/2013 6:41:00 AM
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decided to read them all again my friend....Seren
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 11/15/2015 3:48:00 PM
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No idea how I missed to reply to so many comments! thank you
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Lillie Williams
Date: 2/19/2013 11:45:00 PM
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As the song says; Its so hard to say good bye to yesterday. Another beautiful write. I like it a lot.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 11/15/2015 3:48:00 PM
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Sorry for late reply, and thank you so much!!!
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 2/16/2013 3:30:00 PM
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I love the second stanza, they are so touching :)
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 11/15/2015 3:47:00 PM
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Sorry for late replay, but I think you 1000 times! :)
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 2/10/2013 7:52:00 AM
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Holding hands with yesterday and so.many memories.BeAutiful poem.Welcome to poetrysoup :)
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 11/15/2015 3:47:00 PM
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A belated BIG thank you!!!
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Date: 12/10/2012 3:13:00 PM
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good poem,,thank you for sharing...pd
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 2/8/2013 2:52:00 PM
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Thank you very much, very kind of you! :)

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