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A Foggy Morn

. Fog's mist gently touched enveloping body_ sudden light spirit enlivened Sponsor: Broken Wings Contest: Monoku Form Date: December 4, 2013

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Skat A

Date: 3/15/2014 10:16:00 AM

Sara .. Congratulations with your one amazing line....~SKAT~

D.W. Rodgers

Date: 3/13/2014 9:17:00 AM

Well done, it brings back my one visit to Torrey Pines. I was still on EST and was up at dawn on my morning run, going past the green golf course to the point with the sea mist thick around me.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 3/12/2014 8:51:00 AM

Lovely, congratulations.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/10/2014 5:12:00 PM

way to go, sara, Congats on your win.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/10/2014 4:54:00 PM

- One Amazing Line - Congratulations on your fine win, Sara ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Aiyah Torres

Date: 3/10/2014 3:52:00 PM

Congratulations on your fine win ,Sarah!! ..what a beautiful picture at this poem.. ^__^

Robin Davis

Date: 1/31/2014 5:16:00 PM

Sara What a pretty and serene write. You caught the readers attention in so few words. Nicely done Thanks for the great comment on my Cherished Love poem

Jack Horne

Date: 12/18/2013 4:27:00 PM

love this one - a sure winner

Abdulhafeez Oyewole

Date: 12/8/2013 9:01:00 PM

A nice Monoku for the contest. Best wishes.

Joseph Matose

Date: 12/8/2013 2:01:00 AM

GREAT MONOKU. I'LL ATTEMPT A MONOKU FOR THE FIRST TIME AFTER READING YOURS. THANKS FOR THE INSPIRATION. FRIEND, JM

Cherl Dunn

Date: 12/6/2013 6:14:00 PM

Short but yet sweet, enjoyed! cheri and thanks for your comments on my recent poems. have a great hoilday. again cheri

Joe Maverick

Date: 12/6/2013 12:44:00 PM

It must have been the lighest of fogs to lighten the mood so Sara, I do enjoy the very different feels and scenes in creation..' this inspires thoughts and memories..'

Matthew Anish

Date: 12/6/2013 12:27:00 PM

Short and right to the point. Today it is foggy in NYC. I am off to Israel on Tuesday - will be there for two weeks. Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Donna Jones

Date: 12/5/2013 10:51:00 PM

That's so spot on Sara....good luck....:-)

Jack Horne

Date: 12/4/2013 3:12:00 PM

love this - can see all this so well in my imagination : )

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/4/2013 2:28:00 PM

- Very nice, Sara - Good luck in the contest! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)