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A Flow In My Heart Premiere Contest Winner

I can say so many things that can make you happy and so many things that can make you sad. But one thing that is for sure is how I feel for you I have just acknowledged everything about you. I don't want this to end I want to be more than just your friend I want to feel you and share all that life has to offer. Seeing you is more than a treasure but a reward in the making something that I cannot take for granted. Something that I must cherish and embrace I hope that is with you. I cannot say how much I feel for you and want you I wish that I can share more with you. I wish it wasn't so hard for me to open my heart to you I wish that the feelings were so close. I want to love you and embrace you so much but you are so precious that I can't imagine damaging something that is so good. I cannot even imagine wasting it on junk I hope and pray that one day we can be together and I will not be afraid. No fear and no pain in me a love that is so real and uncondititonal I know that I am not perfect. I know that I am not a saint but please allow me to be the best that I can be

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Date: 5/2/2016 6:54:00 PM
Congrats on taking first place in Nayda's contest.
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Date: 4/30/2016 3:41:00 PM
Congratulations Quondrreika, well done...
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Date: 4/30/2016 3:02:00 PM
Hi Quondreika, Congratulations on your win in the contest....Mike.
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Date: 4/30/2016 1:45:00 PM
Congratulations on the winning write.
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Date: 4/30/2016 12:23:00 PM
Congratulations on your top placement!
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Date: 4/30/2016 12:15:00 PM
Such a beautiful poem that embraces hope. Congratulations on your top of the podium win, Quondreika! Sandra
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Date: 4/30/2016 11:56:00 AM
Congratulations on ur top win. Every line is enriched with literature. Enjoyed...........hugs
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Date: 4/30/2016 11:23:00 AM
Congratulations as #1 in the Hope Poetry Contest. You made a great piece of art.
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Date: 4/30/2016 11:19:00 AM
Congratulation my lovely friend on your great win. Loved always, bl
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Date: 4/30/2016 10:43:00 AM
Congratulations on the first placement of the contest Quondreika. A beautiful poem.
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Date: 6/15/2011 11:23:00 AM
We have so many amazing writers here at PoetrySoup and I enjoy reading all the poems. I am happy your poetry was among the poems I was able to read today Quondreika. Please continue to write and share your poetry with the world. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/14/2011 6:22:00 PM
Very thoughtful and expressive thoughts penned well, Qoundreika
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