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A Fighting Spirit

I must be bold and brave. By not being stuck in yesterday. And just dance on a wave. Look fear in the eye is what I crave, By letting courage have it's say. I must be bold and brave. I long to come out of insecurities cave. Being victorious is the only way. And just dance on a wave. I want to be free before my grave. Conquer my past before I start to gray. I must be bold and brave. Farewell "fear" I'm done being your slave. Be a warrior come what may. And just dance on a wave. You took my self worth, but never gave. A fighting spirit is what I now pray. I must be bold and brave. And just dance on a wave. 7-8-16 Villanelle A Villanelle is a nineteen-line poem consisting of a very specific rhyming scheme: aba aba aba aba aba abaa. The first and the third lines in the first stanza are repeated in alternating order throughout the poem, and appear together in the last couplet (last two lines). Third Place

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Date: 7/27/2016 6:01:00 AM
I can't do these Alexis. Too much of a challenge for me. You did well! Congratulations on your on your third place win! 7 ; )
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Date: 7/26/2016 9:16:00 AM
I have never tried this form, but you did wonders with it, such strength in a fighting spirit. Congratulations!
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Date: 7/25/2016 8:12:00 PM
Alexis, this is remarkable lady...congrats on your placement in the contest :)-luloo
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Date: 7/25/2016 8:10:00 PM
Alexis, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
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Date: 7/25/2016 5:02:00 PM
Alexis,, Congratulations on your win. **SKAT**
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Date: 7/9/2016 6:54:00 PM
Bravery can become a dangerous addiction fine Poetess...though for hearts like ours theres nothing else sweeter in the pulse. "I want to be free before my grave..." so you shall be Alexis...J.A.B.
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Date: 7/8/2016 6:56:00 PM
Alexis, wonderful words to focus on one step at a time for now and the future a 7. Thank you for reading “Mystery and Seclusion” and your very kind and very inspiriting words food for my soul. Hugs Eve
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Date: 7/8/2016 5:15:00 PM
Great job with villanelle form, Alexis. WAs this something you wanted to try for a challenge? It looks like you have done many before!
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Date: 7/9/2016 9:13:00 AM
Hi Andrea, Thank you very much. Yes is something I wanted to challenge myself to do. It was my first attempt:-) Alexis
Date: 7/8/2016 1:33:00 PM
Awesome
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Date: 7/9/2016 9:15:00 AM
Hi Justin, Thank you very much.I'm glad you stopped by today:-) Alexis
Date: 7/8/2016 10:11:00 AM
That's the spirit. I totally agree with you and follow the same principle in life. lead your life best.
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Date: 7/8/2016 6:23:00 AM
Farewell "Fear"... hopefully i can do the same... nice poem... :)
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