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A few more hours the world will count a new year in a new year out and here am I within your arms I count the time by all your charms Our bodies sway you hold me tight the candles blaze On New Year's Night the fireworks within your eyes now scintillate along my thighs we celebrate the time draws near that burst of love to other sphere the TV lights dance to and fro the countdown on in passion glow I see your face bathed in desire we're almost there you rock me higher And then as one we burst in flame "The New Year's come" we both exclaim!! What better place for you and me than in the throes of ecstasy!!! You hear me sigh and sweetly say, "My New Year's joy is here to stay."" Eileen Manassian

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Date: 1/4/2016 1:50:00 PM
Wouldn't this work in the, oh, I forget the name of it, but the Greek Poem Contest of few syllables? It would be quite a contender. A delighting and exciting read ... CayCay
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 1/4/2016 1:56:00 PM
Oh! Thanks, dear....I've already entered one for that. :) Hugs
Date: 1/2/2016 8:52:00 AM
An ooh la la New Year, coming and going at the same time!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 1/2/2016 8:57:00 AM
Yes....that was the idea. Thanks for the visit, dear....
Date: 1/1/2016 4:23:00 PM
A passionate firework display that heralds in another romantic year, Eileen! ~ Wishing you and all close to your heart a happy and blessed new year! Hugs *~* paul
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 1/1/2016 9:32:00 PM
Thank you for visiting my poem, Paul. :) It does my heart good to see you here. I wish you and yours every blessing.....Appassionata.
Date: 1/1/2016 8:55:00 AM
How sensual and romantic, great poem, you painted a vivid picture. Have a Blessed and Happy New Year!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 1/1/2016 9:41:00 AM
Sensual and romantic is the way I roll, dear. Thanks for the visit....hugs
Date: 12/31/2015 8:42:00 PM
A nice way to celebrate, wished i was there to feed on the view...nice write Eileen
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 1/1/2016 6:00:00 AM
Thank you...WS. Very lovely comment.
Date: 12/31/2015 8:14:00 PM
:-) Better way to celebrate than fireworks display. Hi Eileen! Here today just to read/reply and visit some. Wishing you the best this holiday season and great things for 2016! Blessings. Kim
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 1/1/2016 6:02:00 AM
Yes.....I've seen you up and about. Thanks for taking the time to visit, dear. Wish you all the best for the New Year...
Date: 12/31/2015 6:48:00 PM
Whoo hoo...umm....like Jan said, lovely write, congrats, Happy New Year :)
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 1/1/2016 6:05:00 AM
Your comment brought a smile...thank you. Wishing you all the best in the New Year....
Date: 12/31/2015 6:38:00 PM
oooh the queen of passion blazes into 2016 - lovely sensual write Eileen. Happy new Year:-) hugs Jan xx
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 1/1/2016 6:05:00 AM
Internal fireworks beat them all, sweetie. Hugs to you...

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