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A Feast For the Bride

Moonshine hues in a powerful projection peep in to light the lovers’ cavern with profusion. Her tibias go weak; on the stone table, displayed were wooden large bowls full and neatly arrayed. Her colon constricts and she retains a gas, about to leak, as she wants very much to look a bride, composed and meek. A graceful raise of clavicles and a sexy push of the pelvic girdle masked her gluttonous stare which clearly is to tolerate no hurdle. She sniffs cautiously as her bridegroom leads her to her chair; delicious soup of small intestines and roasted gall bladders for two to share. A huge portion he serves her with exaggerated tenderness “This for you, a first humble meal, my beautiful beloved ogress…” Tibias, colon (large intestine), clavicles, pelvic girdle,small intestines, gall bladders. 12/09/16 A body of work (Viv Wigley) Use of 6 body parts

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Date: 9/23/2016 8:10:00 PM
I see congrats down here and I did not know this contest was judged??gotta go check it out!! Waiting for a new poem from you, Sunita!
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Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 9/23/2016 9:39:00 PM
I don't think so...been very busy with changes at work. I'm so touched by your ever encouraging words. Thanks so much. God bless you. Hugs Sunita
Date: 9/22/2016 5:42:00 PM
Well written and nostalgic feast that cannot escape a smile. Congrats dear.
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Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 9/22/2016 9:38:00 PM
Thanks for the kind visit and appreciation. Good luck in your endeavors! :) Sunita
Date: 9/17/2016 11:10:00 PM
You made a feast of smiles! Loved this!
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Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 9/18/2016 12:10:00 AM
Thanks for the read. Glad you enjoyed it! :)
Date: 9/17/2016 5:59:00 AM
My what images! Outstanding write! Good luck with this very unique entry.
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Date: 9/17/2016 6:42:00 AM
Thanks for the warm wishes and for the read friend. All the best to you. Sunita
Date: 9/16/2016 1:14:00 AM
Your poem and your words you have chosen are unique for your entry and they should do really well in the contest! He offered extra points for that. Best of luck Sunita. Great job! : )
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Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 9/16/2016 12:57:00 PM
Thanks you so much Connie for the appreciation and the very encouraging words. I'm glad you like it. :) Sunita
Date: 9/13/2016 3:18:00 PM
hahaha. an ogress. Your poem is delightfully clever. I bet you have a good shot at the win if he only selects a very few!!
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Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 9/14/2016 8:00:00 AM
:D Glad you enjoyed it.I adored stories of ogre and giant since childhood! :) Thanks for the comment.

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