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A Father's Love

A Father’s Love Who would deny a father’s love That burns within a fevered breast? My heart seeks mercy from above; It’s empty now you’ve left the nest. I wish you well upon your way, Sweet child of mine with face so fair. I’ll think of you ‘most every day, To you I dedicate this prayer. It is no sin for man to weep, Emotions surely need to flow. Pure love’s not lost if it is deep, And all the sweeter to bestow. My love endures, a love divine So pure, and filled with equity. Go forth with strength, dear child of mine; I’ll love you for eternity.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 2/20/2016 6:25:00 AM
You can certainly spin a rhyme, Faye. A most elegant and charming little poem...beautifully expressed! All my very best, Faye! :-) john
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Date: 1/10/2016 6:10:00 PM
Enjoyed the poem
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Faye Lowley
Date: 1/13/2016 8:59:00 AM
Thank you for your comments on my poem, glad you enjoyed it. faye
Date: 1/10/2016 5:44:00 PM
A very sweet poem.
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Faye Lowley
Date: 1/13/2016 9:02:00 AM
Thank you for your comments on my poem. So glad you enjoyed it, Faye
Date: 12/10/2015 4:31:00 PM
Hi Faye, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Faye Lowley
Date: 1/13/2016 9:01:00 AM
Hi, Linda, sorry for delay in replying. I have been sick since Xmas. Thank you for your nice welcome. Look forward to reading your poetry, also. Faye
Date: 12/3/2015 9:52:00 AM
Hi Faye, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Faye Lowley
Date: 12/3/2015 10:26:00 AM
Hi, Skat I have been writing poetry for about 20 years and recently had my first book published. I only write rhyming poetry on all topics. I will take a look at your work later. Nice to meet you. Faye

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