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A Fantasy of Relief

Pointed subtle agony Wraps cold fingers around my heart Separation of what I am.... Free falling lazily like dead leaves into what I am not... Scarlet Rage finger paints Black arcs across my world Red is hypnotic, like flowing blood loosed by one small flick of a blade... Heaviness seeps in, as though already dead and buried A Fantasy of relief.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2006




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Date: 9/18/2010 10:18:00 PM
sophisticated and poignant, great read
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Date: 9/18/2010 7:15:00 PM
well done
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Date: 9/18/2010 5:16:00 PM
Hello, Kelly here I am stopping by to say hi and CONGRATULATIONS! What a delightful poem. Had fun reading your featured poem of the week. Take care,.. p.d.
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Date: 9/17/2010 9:05:00 PM
congratulations on yoiur featured poem,Kelly.
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Date: 9/17/2010 6:33:00 PM
;) thanks!!
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Date: 9/13/2010 12:49:00 PM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week here at PoetrySoup Kelly. Love, Carol
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