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A Fall Walk

As I walk among drifted leaves , watching as a few more fly. One by chance clings to my sleeve, I am reminded of years gone by. Where I am deep within a leaf pile, that grandpa was raking up. I recall that smell so sweet and mild, as with each rake stroke I was enveloped . I continue further on my way, spying rabbits nibbling flowers. I hear coyotes sing their unique talk, so alluring, I could listen for hours. But a twilight sky comes creeping fast, as it always does this time of year. I watch the evenings colors cast, upon backdrops both far and near. I breathe in the fading light, tasting wood smoke scented dusk. Through the landscape a wispy flight, trailing along a fragrant musk. An aromatic memory comes to mind, of bonfires on the beach sands. Mesmerized by the dyeing sun on the tide and the vivid hues as they'd expand. I stand now in my front yard, to watch stars one by one wink on. Each on like a diamond shard, that on a velvet cloak is sewn upon.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 9/20/2012 10:26:00 AM
Congratulations on your very well deserved win in Russell's "Autumn Splendor" contest Paula. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/17/2012 7:06:00 AM
PAULA Congrats with your win ~SKAT
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Date: 9/16/2012 9:57:00 AM
You ignited the senses with this visual poem, Paula, in which also scents are described. Great rhyming and descriptive poem. A well deserved win. Congratulations.
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Date: 9/15/2012 11:44:00 PM
Paula.. congratulations with your awesome imagery in Russell Sivey's " Autumn Splendor " beautiful contest. Always nice to support all contest when possible~ Good night :-* PD
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Date: 9/15/2012 2:06:00 PM
Congratulations on a great poem and win Paula. Love, Joyce
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Date: 5/27/2010 6:48:00 PM
Fantastic imagery, Paula!! This is a beauty!! Enjoyed it....Peace, Audrey
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Date: 5/27/2010 8:25:00 AM
This one takes my breath away.............oh wow...a real beauty, and into my favs!! Loved it!!!!
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Date: 5/26/2010 10:13:00 PM
beautifuly written
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