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A dream comes floating - - -

^^ ^^ ^^ ^^ ^^ Spirit, a man in a crisp white shirt, head shaved but for one braid with feathers, his blue leggings enthrall me, his intricate beaded moccasins are beautiful, his leather pouch and his glass jewelry lovely, his is very dignified. I could love him. We are at the junction of the Little River and the Ottawa River, journeying into the Canadian wilderness by canoe, the paddles dipping slowly into the water, paddles heavily incised with vines and flowers. I dip my long black hair into the blue. Falcon, a man with raven hair falling down his back paddles, his feathers are fluttering in the wind, he has dangling earrings, a red cap edged with gold threads, his beads as beautiful as he is, and he is telling me stories of "The People" and smiling at me. I could love him. O, how can this Ojibwa girl choose, I love them both, I truly do, but luckily this is but a dream so I can have both. ^^ ^^ ^^ ^^ ^^ ^^ Narrative December 10, 2012

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  1. Date: 12/29/2012 7:58:00 AM
    dream dream dream, i wouldn't want to wake up especially from a dream as such, amazing narrative, Constance -Lucas-

  1. Date: 12/10/2012 10:39:00 PM
    wow, what a dreamy dream this was! VEry interesting how you told the story and how you described two beautiful native american men. I think you would make a beautiful Ojigwa girl for them!

  1. Date: 12/10/2012 10:23:00 PM
    Beautiful poem. (miigwech) thank you.

  1. Date: 12/10/2012 3:36:00 PM
    This is a very beautiful and awe inspiring write my friend! I truly loved reading this delightful and pleasant poem this afternoon! This is a peaceful and wondrous piece, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 12/10/2012 3:33:00 PM
    You write with images so well.. hugs from Santa Michael

  1. Date: 12/10/2012 3:18:00 PM
    I also love this so...a bit mysterious but it keep me reading to the end...

  1. Date: 12/10/2012 1:33:00 PM
    love this beautiful and imaginative write, my friend. Hope you are having a great day x