A Door

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Gray wispy clouds skillfully painted Encapsulate the sun While birds' tunes craftily are sung A new day's play starts to run Some birds still are quietly nodding To a rhythm all their own But the doves awaken early Before the sun rays are shown There is a Dove of Peace Who doesn't sleep, He's there all the time Feel Him knock on your heart's door Saying no, only true crime

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Monterey Sirak

Date: 5/25/2015 2:18:00 PM

Amen!! Just say YES!

Kp Nunez

Date: 5/25/2015 8:46:00 AM

I like this Sara. It is indeed the biggest crime to reject Him when He knocks on the doors of our hearts. But then again, it's been said already, that His is the peace that the world does not understand...sad...:-( Loved this write, a 7.

M. L. Kiser

Date: 5/25/2015 6:38:00 AM

Beautiful, Sara.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/24/2015 5:57:00 PM

That last stanza is just beautiful in its meaning for us all, Sara.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/22/2015 1:43:00 PM

Wow, Sara, that is deep, i got a bit confused at the end. is that the heart saying, NO, to crime, or is it saying, i will only let crime in,.., Just wondering... LINDA