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A Done Mans Thoughts

The man sits back Thinking to himself Trying to find himself The time has come For a decision The time is nigh To clear his vision His thoughts are clustered And unsure What should he think? What has he done? He can’t figure out What he needs to be alive Why can’t he be without? All he wants is to survive.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 3/16/2011 5:47:00 AM
I can relate to the confusion that comes with making a decision... It's a nice illustration for the mind to comprehend.
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Date: 2/1/2011 10:28:00 AM
I think it's good. Isn't this about what your parents are making you choose?
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Date: 1/31/2011 5:30:00 PM
enjoyed reading your lines today....check out some of my attempts at poetry if you have a strong mind and are daring ;)
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