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Below is the poem entitled A DOLL'S CONFESSION which was written by poet Domi Marchewka. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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I am a doll -
A doll from your corner

You used to love me
And you used to care

Now you've grown old -
All good times are over
But to say I'm lonely

Would still be unfair

I have hot tears to keep me company

My face - stigmatized

- A motionless smile!

I've prayed for so long...

Yes, it may seem funny -
A doll praying that

G*d would let her cry...  

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  1. Date: 5/6/2009 7:39:00 AM
    Beacause I am Jewish. We shouldn't write/say His name. :)

  1. Date: 5/6/2009 7:12:00 AM
    Poor personified doll. It's a good poem, I just don't understand why God was bleeped out