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A Different Taste

Those hateful green eyes. . . I’ve seen more color in blacks and grays than in your bottomless hell You call yourself a true friend? With you, I’ve never been more ignored! I had once begged for your attention, But now I dread it You’ve found the bad in me And now you present it I want to call you out till the life returns in those heartless eyes Till you taste the red blood of thousands you have shed— Till real tears free you from the glare of your green We shall mix and match and make new, oh I promise you— We will make bright yellows together and call it justice I’ll turn your vanity into desperate prayers Try your glares—I’ve got nastier snares What is it in those canny, green eyes That makes you hate the very air that gives you life? You inhale kind souls with that glare of ingratitude Spitting them out with disgusting, aftertaste claims Oh, you know so well not to take in mine anymore That bitter Wormwood that’s got your taste, bud— Well it’s got nothing on me

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 5/12/2016 11:58:00 AM
Beautiful in the most unique way.. Loving this piece so much
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Date: 4/28/2016 5:16:00 AM
nice expression of your emotions... great piece...
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 4/29/2016 9:43:00 PM
Thanks so much for taking the time to read! ~Laura
Date: 4/6/2016 3:18:00 AM
You have many tastes Laura yet bland is never one of them...my favorite, is when you taste like a love storm, red in a blue gray sky...I know why you love to fight...J.A.B.
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 4/12/2016 5:26:00 AM
Thank you my love. I will always admire the colors and tastes of your beautiful spirit. <3 ~Laura
Date: 4/6/2016 3:05:00 AM
Excellent. Always a pleasure to read your wonderful poems. Enjoyed. Thanks for sharing it.
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 4/12/2016 5:24:00 AM
Thanks, Ravi. You're so sweet! ~Laura
Date: 4/6/2016 12:53:00 AM
WoW ... I can feel the anger in this one ... betrayal too. That's the danger of giving too much of your heart to someone ... they have leverage. "What is it in those canny, green eyes that makes you hate the very air that gives you life?" Sinister! Someone like this can't even enjoy a beautiful day when it hits him in the face. "Oh, you know so well not to take mine anymore That bitter Wormwood that's got your taste, bud-- Well it's got nothing on me"
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 4/6/2016 1:50:00 AM
I've attracted a lot of wormwood tasters in my life-some wriggled their way out, others still linger.. gottah learn how to protect those that are unaware. I feel there are many flavors to us, pleasant, delectable tastes, to awful retchable tastes - and if we so choose to go there, we will indeed taste the bitter end of ourselves. Your comment made me smile. You're off the hook blue eyed poet! ;) <3 ~Laura
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 4/6/2016 12:56:00 AM
Moral of this story? Don't mess with a pissed off Laura! ... I'm glad my eyes are blue (that's a load off my back) ... an excellent outpouring of emotion here.
Date: 4/6/2016 12:04:00 AM
beautifully vitriolic and not a flight of fancy...this is real, and " i feel it" or rather the thing in me i call fugue does,...its screaming REAL !!! x
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 4/6/2016 12:22:00 AM
No need for fanciness when you gottah be a bit belligerent to get the point across. Thanks for stoppin by! ~Laura
Date: 4/5/2016 10:45:00 PM
An intricately woven piece of writing which reminded me of my daughter ! Especially the first verse. Thanks Laura for a wonderful dramatic monologue.
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 4/6/2016 12:19:00 AM
Thank you Lenny for reading, and for the wonderful feedback. ~Laura

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