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A Different Style of Carriage

Perfect posture Your back is straight Elegant gait Beauty will shine Don’t ever slouch Align your spine God’s own design Classy chassis Jan Allison 4th August 2014 Written for RIDE ON A PATHYA VA Contest Sponsored by Nette Onclaud ~Awarded 1st place~

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/11/2014 6:21:00 PM

wow, a great win for a GREAT poem. You did superbly, dear.

Jan Allison
Date: 8/11/2014 6:23:00 PM

Thank you so much Andrea for the amazing comment:-) hugs Jan xxx

Early Jae

Date: 8/11/2014 4:54:00 PM

This is awesomely unique! Def deserving of 1st place!!

Jan Allison
Date: 8/11/2014 4:55:00 PM

Thank you so much Nette wanted to think out of the box - so I did :-) Hugs Jan xxx

Casarah Nance

Date: 8/11/2014 4:17:00 PM

Yay!! Grats on your win!! I am so happy for you :) :)

Jan Allison
Date: 8/11/2014 4:34:00 PM

I'm smiling like a Cheshire cat Casarah can't believe it:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 8/11/2014 2:54:00 PM

Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Jan Allison
Date: 8/11/2014 3:00:00 PM

Thanks very much Debbie:-) Hugs jan xx

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 8/11/2014 6:18:00 AM

Congratulations and I enjoyed your poem. God bless you. and Happy writing!!!

Jan Allison
Date: 8/11/2014 7:20:00 AM

Thanks for the lovely comment Regina:-) hugs jan xxx

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 8/11/2014 5:33:00 AM

Brilliant unique take Jan,, so u place at top my friend,, huge congrats!

Jan Allison
Date: 8/11/2014 5:48:00 AM

Thanks Dr Sharma I am so delighted with my placement in Nette's contest - she always inspires me to try my best:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/10/2014 10:39:00 AM

i will never look at carriage the same way again, jan.. this is way out of the ball park!... thanks for supporting my contest and big congrats on your top spot.. huggs

Jan Allison
Date: 8/10/2014 12:21:00 PM

You do encourage us to 'think outside the box' so i am delighted that I achieved this!!! Hugs Jan xxx

David Mohn

Date: 8/10/2014 9:49:00 AM

Unique and clever...big congrats to you Jan

Jan Allison
Date: 8/10/2014 9:52:00 AM

Thanks so much David - I tried to think outside the box on the theme of 'carriage' and I am so delighted we shared the top spot:-) Hugs jan xxx

Seren Roberts

Date: 8/10/2014 8:02:00 AM

Well done Jan....Seren

Jan Allison
Date: 8/10/2014 9:09:00 AM

Thanks Seren for your lovely comment:-) Hugs Jan xx

Verlena S. Walker

Date: 8/10/2014 7:10:00 AM

Nicely done Jan... Congrats! 1st place win... Verlena

Jan Allison
Date: 8/10/2014 9:09:00 AM

Thanks Verlena I am delighted:-) Hugs jan xxx

Mohan Chutani

Date: 8/10/2014 6:08:00 AM

nice classy ride on the chariot and top win. congrats Jan. Mohan

Jan Allison
Date: 8/10/2014 9:08:00 AM

Thanks Mohan for your lovely comment:-) Hugs jan xxx

Tim Smith

Date: 8/10/2014 5:32:00 AM

Wow Jan....congratulations on your top spot....hugs Tim

Jan Allison
Date: 8/10/2014 5:32:00 AM

Oh I didn't realise the contest had been judged - thank you for your kind comment:-) Hugs jan xxx

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/10/2014 5:21:00 AM

Very unique write, Jan. congrats on the win

Jan Allison
Date: 8/10/2014 5:33:00 AM

Thank you so much for your lovely comment - I've yet to look at the winning list:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/5/2014 11:42:00 AM

thank you, jan... huggs

Jan Allison
Date: 8/5/2014 11:47:00 AM

Ohh am glad it is poems with names on! Hope you enjoy this write Nette I do so love the challenges you set us! Hugs Jan xxx

Casarah Nance

Date: 8/4/2014 8:49:00 PM

you are unique and I love it! good job ;)

Jan Allison
Date: 8/5/2014 11:46:00 AM

Oh yes Casarah when God made Blunderwoman he broke the mold no cloning me LOL Hugs Jan xxx

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 8/4/2014 7:27:00 PM

interesting form Jan a poem of beauty and depth gl in contest ty for visiting my page hugs

Jan Allison
Date: 8/5/2014 11:44:00 AM

Thanks Shadow its my first attempt at this form - Nette always finds us great challenges! Hugs Jan

Vera Duggan

Date: 8/4/2014 7:04:00 PM

Very well written Jan, thank goodness I didn't have to do that, like you I am a little shortie and pretty well formed, for an oldie anyway, but I was always small and thin, thank you for lovely read and good luck in the contest. Take care my friend..........Vera...........

Jan Allison
Date: 8/5/2014 11:41:00 AM

Thanks for dropping by with your lovely comment Vera:-) Hugs Jan xx

Tim Smith

Date: 8/4/2014 4:49:00 PM

Well done Jan. Love the chassis line..wonderful...hugs Tim

Jan Allison
Date: 8/4/2014 4:50:00 PM

LOL thanks for the comment Tim. I really struggled with this form Cas has done hers brilliantly! Hugs Jan xxx

Jan Allison

Date: 8/4/2014 4:18:00 PM

Hoping they get the formatting issues sorted before the contest closes!