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A Degree Or Two

the talk around the table turned to matters of import and one of those there seated was heard to make retort above the hubbub and the drone of lively conversation being carried on at once expressing reservation on a point of relevance to the current topic underlying all the words the feeling was entropic silently they heard her out and weighed her every word then they went back to the task her point was not absurd the level of intensity that of the conversation had risen a degree or two 'twas how to save a nation without the need for shedding blood while protecting property they felt belonged to all of them the weal of the free

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Date: 3/8/2015 10:55:00 AM
"the weal of the free" your words say it all. A closed mind is akin to death and awaits its final hours while an open mind is reborn each day in its quest to experience what is new and alive. Emile. #7
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Steven Hanlon
Date: 3/10/2015 5:11:00 AM
thankyou indeed emile for all of your comments, your words have wings. i'll get back to your catalogue as soon as i have time. very enjoyable
Date: 3/6/2015 7:06:00 AM
Dear Steven What a constructive write here my new friend, now this is a table for which I'd like to sit around and discuss topics of the day and of the past. Love your visonary flare, nice imagery, and wonderful word choose, I'm glad you like my in the pain of night poem, cheri
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Steven Hanlon
Date: 3/7/2015 1:25:00 AM
thankyou very much cherl, be nice wouldn't it
Date: 3/6/2015 5:49:00 AM
- An interesting conversation around the table - Great poem Steven ! - Thanks for visiting my poem - I wish you a lovely weekend :) - // Anne-Lise :)
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Steven Hanlon
Date: 3/6/2015 6:02:00 AM
thnx anne-lise, my pleasure. my weekends are bliss interrupted by golf
Date: 3/6/2015 3:56:00 AM
Her idea even to me deserves a solid 7!! Great write Steven.
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Steven Hanlon
Date: 3/6/2015 5:23:00 AM
thnx njeri, good to hear from you

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