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a deflated balloon

Was she a dream
Or was she real
Makes no difference
How I feel

She once was here
But now she's gone
Makes no difference
Right or wrong

She's my life and death
Perfume with in my breath
Makes no difference
If I long

I'm still here
But she's gone

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  1. Date: 1/12/2013 7:09:00 PM
    A reminder that you are still here and she is gone. Life is not always fair as to who stays and who goes but that is life. Nicely done with this poem. I think I am all caught up reading your poems. love phyl

  1. Date: 1/9/2013 6:53:00 AM
    I am so sorry to “hear” it. If it true and not just a poem then It is tragic and more tragic cannot be! I am so sorry. Personally I believe in afterlife and have written some poems on the subject as LIBERATOR and REINCARNATION among others. For over thirty years I am dealing with the subject and have met mother who have lost their children and husbands and vice versa. She is THERE existing, waiting, overlooking over you! Your writing is marvelous and have enjoyed it! Thank you!

  1. Date: 1/8/2013 12:48:00 PM
    She must have been real, if she was here, and now has gone, enjoyed your wonderful write John, love Elizabeth

  1. Date: 1/7/2013 1:11:00 PM
    I like this one John, very good xx

  1. Date: 1/6/2013 9:34:00 PM
    very nice John,,,, Happy New Year ;}

  1. Date: 1/6/2013 6:01:00 PM
    I can feel the pain in the lines of this work...Enjoyed reading this eve..Thanks for stopping by..So you like country ham and red-eye gravy?..Sara

  1. Date: 1/6/2013 1:27:00 PM
    I know...

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    Date: 1/6/2013 2:21:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    sorry can't help it.
  1. Date: 1/5/2013 3:53:00 PM
    Such sadness bring the loss of those held dear.Sad yet beautiful poem

  1. Date: 1/5/2013 3:42:00 PM
    A sad poem John, the soul lives on withing our memories, you bring her to life each time you share her with us, well done, have a blessed day, xxx

  1. Date: 1/4/2013 2:44:00 AM
    beautiful verse. Very touching words. nicely penned. thanks for reading some more of my work..i appreciate the feedback Always, Laura

  1. Date: 1/3/2013 6:07:00 AM
    Hi John, another sad reminder of whaat is no more. You write thes4e so beautifully, nothing like experience to inspire. Love, Elizabeth

  1. Date: 1/2/2013 1:00:00 PM
    Simply said with meaning, and beautiful John! thank you for sharing x peace, Ruby