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A Dedication To Lucy - the Advice

LUCY - The ADVICE Remember this: From boys up to men, it’s always the same Your heart gets broken …to them it’s a game. Loving and sweetness when first you begin Claiming ‘you don’t care’, they make you give in You must be patient, you must make them wait Two weeks or two months, YOU control the date! If you don’t do this, here’s what to expect… They’ll offer ‘false love’, and show no respect! Soon there’s an inkling of a love in distress You vainly cling on ….till you’re all in a mess! The rarer the gem - the harder to get… The harder to get - the higher the value… The higher the value - the more the respect… The more the respect - the rarer the gem! Remember this: From boys up to men, it’s always the same… They want a ‘rare’ gem…. or else it’s a game! (The Fg 81.5.8)

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Date: 12/4/2015 5:18:00 PM
very nice write. check out mine on poetrysoup for daniel schack poems. peace of mind to ya daniel schack
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Date: 12/2/2015 6:55:00 AM
Yes. Beautifully crafted Friend
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Date: 12/2/2015 3:53:00 AM
Like all I have also enjoyed the advice!
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Date: 12/1/2015 7:19:00 PM
I agree, this should be required reading, and sent throughout the texting universe. Very well written!
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Date: 12/1/2015 2:22:00 PM
Well-written rhyme poem with clear message. Easy flow, great rhymes, well-planned. A dad giving daughter this message is my hero!
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Date: 12/1/2015 2:21:00 PM
Wonderfully painted pictures worthy of frame.
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Date: 12/1/2015 12:46:00 PM
Peace and God's Blessings to you and yours... Indeed, sage advice from someone who sees and thinks deeply. Hmm, but how many people who peruse this will truly comprehend it's priceless meaning? Very well thought out, and executed...
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Date: 12/1/2015 12:31:00 PM
I love how you do the let me tell you what thing. And then deliver. The fourth verse is a gem.
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Date: 12/1/2015 11:59:00 AM
Very true. I like it.
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Date: 12/1/2015 11:37:00 AM
Robert: This should be required reading in all middle schools. By High school it's probably too late. :o( Thanks for sharing. Well said. oldbuck
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Date: 8/31/2015 5:15:00 PM
I hope she heeds your wise advice:-) hugs Jan xx
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