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A Dance a Flow

I try to follow the flow though your move is slow I seem to be falling behind falling falling behind I like the cadence of your language it gives me a dance I love that beat that dance give me that cadence that balanced rhythmic flow because l want to dance and dance without feeling wrong or slow your voice dances its way marches into my soul in that way as it gently rises and falls like that please don`t stop l adore that…

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Date: 10/12/2014 6:06:00 AM
now that is dancing true beautiful piece
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Date: 5/1/2014 7:10:00 AM
simply beautiful visions ;)
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Date: 12/4/2013 4:52:00 PM
Dropping by to say hello.
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Ndaba Sibanda
Date: 3/26/2014 4:50:00 AM
Richard, l am ok. Thanks.
Date: 11/30/2013 4:22:00 PM
Very nice, Ndaba. I enjoyed the flow of your thought. Sweet one.
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Ndaba Sibanda
Date: 3/26/2014 4:53:00 AM
Toquyen, thanks!
Date: 11/30/2013 3:57:00 PM
- A nice poem to read - Like   your thoughts dancing in your lovely poem Ndaba. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/30/2013 9:11:00 AM
When we don't know the steps even a slow dance is hard to follow. If we watch carefully we will soon be in step and can be fully in the moment. I enjoyed this metophor.
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Date: 11/30/2013 8:42:00 AM
nicely penned...I enjoyed the read
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Date: 11/30/2013 6:29:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your work that has good rhythm and flow to it..I am glad that I chosse this one today..I noticed that you dropped by my work..I appreciate the time spent there..Sara
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