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A Dad's Letter To His Marine

Son, I'm so proud that you elected to serve in the United States Marines. Military service is a family tradition - it just happens to be in our genes! Your forefathers have worn the uniform since the genesis of this nation. All were privileged to serve, feeling that it was their solemn obligation! One of your distant relatives served as a lieutenant in The Revolution. He lost an arm at Brandywine to boost this nation's glorious evolution! A soldier on your mother's side was a sergeant in the Battle of New Orleans. In letters he told of subsisting on meager rations of rancid pork and beans! A grandfather shouldered a musket in the Mexican War affair. Another, a corporal of cavalry in the Union Army served with elegant flair! In the Spanish-American fray, one of your kin charged up San Juan Hill. Your great grandpa led a platoon in World War One with consummate skill! Your granddad was a fighter pilot in the South Pacific and became an ace, And he later soared as an astronaut through the vast reaches of space! I was privileged to serve as an army chaplain during the Korean War. Your Aunt Sarah served with distinction in Viet Nam with the Nurses Corps! So, you see son, you have a distinguished heritage upon which to build, Serving all humankind to ensure that our quest for liberty is fulfilled! Godspeed, Marine! Here's my old wartime copy of the Twenty-Third Psalm. When assailed from all sides, it will provide you with great solace and calm! Robert L. Hinshaw, CMSgt, USAF, Retired © All Rights Reserved Placed No. 4 in Gail Doyle's "Writing A Heartfelt Poem To A Soldier" Contest July 2012

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Date: 7/15/2012 5:14:00 PM
Awesome,,, you have a lot of history running thru your veins,,,, I always loved and still do love history,,,, you have a blessed day Bob;}
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Date: 7/8/2012 6:12:00 PM
robert, congratulations with your wonderful win -xox~pd
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Date: 7/6/2012 11:36:00 AM
Congratulations on your super win in Gail's contest Bob. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/6/2012 10:12:00 AM
A distinguished poem... You have quite a family. Congratulations on the win.
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Date: 7/4/2012 5:06:00 PM
Congrats on your winning work..Sara
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Date: 7/4/2012 11:13:00 AM
Bob, what a moving history of your family's dedication to this country. Mike
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Date: 7/4/2012 7:57:00 AM
congrats Bob on a wonderful wrie and win for this tremendous touching poem luv.. as always .. a joy..
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Date: 7/3/2012 10:50:00 PM
I just read below that this is a fictitious write. Wow, it's so good I was fooled! Excellent work!!
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Date: 7/3/2012 10:44:00 PM
Congratulations, Bob, on your win with this touching, heartfelt letter to your son! I love the attention to detail regarding your family heritage. I can feel your pride and love in each line. Outstanding! Love and Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 7/3/2012 7:56:00 PM
Congratulations on your letter winning.
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Date: 6/30/2012 5:35:00 PM
An excellent letter, Robert... with your historical detail and prodigious vocabulary this is quite an exposition. SEMPER FI, my friend!
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Date: 6/30/2012 2:28:00 AM
I haven't been on Poetry Soup for a little while Bob, but your comment on my "Gnat" poem brought me here, and then I find I've missed a really find poem that you've written. How but you NOT follow in the steps of your forbears? What a wonderful family you are descended from. My father fought in the last Battle of the Somme in France 1918 and was just 18. My grandfather and his six brothers also fought in WW1 and strangely and luckily, all returned. Not many did.
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Date: 6/29/2012 7:15:00 PM
It's an honor to read about your family military history. Your presentation is the best! Coincidentally, I was just talking to a cousin of mine about some of the military history in our family and how he had carried on the tradition with his own service.
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Date: 7/1/2012 5:52:00 PM
Hi Bob - Thanks for stopping by, reading my latest limerick, and setting me straight on this poem. Didn't realize this is fictional, but I have to say that this is really superb. The knowledge, imagination, and talent you have to put this together is amazing. - Gail
Date: 6/29/2012 6:47:00 PM
I can feel the pride in this poem. A great family tradition.
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Date: 6/28/2012 7:58:00 PM
who better to write this poem than you, my friend. WELL DONE!!!
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Date: 6/28/2012 4:28:00 PM
wow. What a great poem. It is so wonderful and shows a person who not only loves family for for those serving our country. bravo! laurel
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Date: 6/28/2012 11:17:00 AM
It is a great poem,Robert.Hope you are well.My book Moonlight and Solitude will be launched on 5th July 2012 at Muncipal Library Hall,Guruvayur,Kreala,India.Many famous writers and a film actor will take part in the function.You are cordially invited to the function.With love,Fabiyas M V
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Date: 6/28/2012 8:45:00 AM
I love this touching write, Bob. A big winner for sure. So glad to hear you are both doing well - my mother was tired for several months after her treatment, but there's no stopping her now!
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Date: 6/27/2012 9:39:00 AM
i honor this piece with its poetic handle on the whole spiritual and physical world of service to one's country, bob... i can relate to this inspiring work as my military ancestry goes four generations back... beautifully penned with winning streaks!..:) huggs!
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Date: 6/24/2012 4:24:00 PM
As mine flight begins dear poet, this share of yours has been one with depths to flee with ! Such a loving soul to pass love such as this ! Awesome dear sir, and may Jehovah's blessings be with you and yours forever more ! Have a wonderful life my friend...much love.............................................james
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Date: 6/24/2012 4:19:00 PM
Dear Bob H., this is one of the most wonderful and heartfelt poem I have read for this contest. A father can be great inspiration ,, no matter the situation or fear of one. This poem is going to my favorites today. It is an honor to read how one can inspire through a letter and poem.. Thank you always~~ PD
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Date: 6/24/2012 10:12:00 AM
Excellent reading of pride, history and duty. Definitely need to have a head straight on your shoulders to do this kind of work! The rhymes really accentuated the grand feeling, tone, buildup and declaration
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Date: 6/24/2012 8:48:00 AM
Good morning, Bob! What a rich military tradition in your family..unless this is fiction...If you were a chaplain then it would explain a lot about you! The deep spiritual roots in your poetry...give me the scoop! gwendolen
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Date: 6/24/2012 7:12:00 AM
What a great letter of praise and history. This is a family heirloom and treasure. Take good care of it and thank you for your service and for sharing sincerly Bobb (army 90-94) Marly
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Date: 6/24/2012 6:43:00 AM
It has been a pleasure to read such a wonderful poem!! Lori
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