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A Christmas Snow

It snowed all night! On Christmas Day, the ground was white, so we could play. Then men of snow stood in a row. For Gail’s A Christmas Snow contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 12/16/2014 11:21:00 AM
When we get older we tend to not look forward to winter. Thank you for reminding me of how much I loved it as a child. Peace and Merry Christmas. :)
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Date: 12/14/2014 2:37:00 PM
I see that you probably didn't make it as well as I didn't make it..Well better winnings next time..Enjoyed reading this one today..Sara
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Date: 12/13/2014 12:16:00 PM
Lovely scene you have created. Our snow has mostly melted due to warm air. It was nice to get out and do the shopping. It is like a hint of spring at the moment but we still have those cold months ahead. Lovely poem. love phyl
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Date: 12/2/2014 7:30:00 AM
Jack, this is lovely, best of luck in the contest ~~
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Date: 11/26/2014 12:15:00 AM
Jack, you are a MASTER at taking a theme and making it so short!! and you rhymed like she likes too. So cute.
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Date: 11/25/2014 11:11:00 PM
Lovely visual in just a few words, jack... happy holydays!.. huggs
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Date: 11/25/2014 10:51:00 PM
Tis the season for white magic. It fills the soul with joy. Children with their cheeks so rosy. Every girl and boy. Wishing you a wonder holiday season Jack. Peace. :)
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Date: 11/25/2014 4:03:00 PM
Snow on Christmas day is said to make it a perfect day! This lovely poem would! [I have never seen snow on Christmas day; over here it never snows.] // paul
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