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A Child's Christmas

Why are they sitting there watching me Those cheeky elves that sit on a shelf Are they spying for Santa Claus Will they say I behaved myself I love to hold those cheeky elves Putting them back in a different pose Their bodies are all bent ready To sit on a ledge, whichever I chose. Are they watching me search the wardrobes Looking for parcels anew Maybe Santa came early and put some here Or whatever Santa’s do The music is playing downstairs Carols about good tidings and joy I sing away as I keep up the search Surely somewhere there’s a brand new toy It’s Christmas Eve and I try to sleep Cos that’s what I am told to do I peep through my lashes at the elves I am sure they winked back at me too. Penned 31 December 2013

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Date: 1/7/2014 1:27:00 AM
Hi poppet a super win for you, love it , take care love xx
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Seren Roberts
Date: 1/23/2014 10:26:00 PM
thanks Mandy ...Seren
Date: 1/6/2014 11:48:00 PM
Congrats on your win! :) Maggie Mae
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Date: 1/23/2014 10:27:00 PM
Thanks for the comment ...Seren
Date: 1/6/2014 10:26:00 PM
a lovely write Seren...congrats on your win
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Seren Roberts
Date: 1/23/2014 10:27:00 PM
Thank you Joseph....Seren
Date: 1/6/2014 8:59:00 PM
Write full of Christmas spirit and congratulations on your fine win,Seren
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Seren Roberts
Date: 1/23/2014 10:29:00 PM
Thank you Ram ...Seren
Date: 1/6/2014 6:51:00 PM
Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Seren Roberts
Date: 1/23/2014 10:28:00 PM
Hi Debbie, Many thanks ...Seren
Date: 1/6/2014 5:28:00 PM
Those elves would creep me out, there would be no way I would sleep *lol*. Congratulations Seren.
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Seren Roberts
Date: 1/23/2014 10:28:00 PM
Oh my, frightened of little elves lol..........Thanks for the comment ...Seren
Date: 1/6/2014 2:23:00 PM
Christmas through a child's eyes! So sweet this is! Congratulations dear Seren on this lovely, tender poem!
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Seren Roberts
Date: 1/6/2014 3:24:00 PM
glad u liked it Carrie, first write for awhile...Seren
Date: 1/6/2014 1:09:00 PM
Way to go..Congrats...Sara
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Seren Roberts
Date: 1/6/2014 3:23:00 PM
thx Sara ...Seren
Date: 1/6/2014 11:58:00 AM
lovely write Seren congrats on your win ty too for your support Shadow x smile hug
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Seren Roberts
Date: 1/6/2014 3:23:00 PM
Thank you Shadow ...Seren
Date: 12/31/2013 6:29:00 PM
This is a wonderful write my friend! You have written a very pleasing and glorious poem here this evening! What a brilliant piece, Excellent Work! I also want to wish you and yours a very Happy New Year my friend!
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Seren Roberts
Date: 1/6/2014 3:22:00 PM
ty Russell ..Seren
Date: 12/31/2013 8:51:00 AM
Lovely take on the theme of the contest if it is so. Seren and best wishes for the new year round the corner.
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Seren Roberts
Date: 1/6/2014 3:22:00 PM
ty ...Seren

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