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Below is the poem entitled A CHILD'S CHRISTMAS which was written by poet nette onclaud. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Crystal flakes decorate her long tresses
As  rosy eyes wishes for a necklace,
With golden cross to recall Christmas’ magic
On seventh year; up high, she lifts her face.

Enchanted, fireworks line across the clouds
Upon her body fairy stardust glitter;
Pixie wings glide by, molding snow angels
As she joins dances of frost-wanderers.

Atop the tree, Godmother Mary drifts
Hands beaming in trinkets from heaven’s shawl
Lucent the night with thousand winks of stars,
While a babe’s eyes frame her young neck, enthralled.

In a gush, fairy angels bid goodbye
To disappear in sweet,Bethlehem sky!

Shadow Hamilton's A Child's Christmas Contest

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  1. Date: 1/8/2014 3:55:00 PM
    Way to go..Congrats..Sara

  1. Date: 1/7/2014 1:01:00 AM
    Nice write full of Christmas spirit and congrats on the fine win, nette

  1. Date: 1/6/2014 6:58:00 PM
    Verse two is very special you of course have a unique Christmas not like New England, a very sophisticated write nette, charming elegant..Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 1/6/2014 5:35:00 PM
    Magicla much like the writer. Congratulations Nette.

  1. Date: 1/6/2014 12:27:00 PM
    very nice Nette congrats on placing ty too for your support Shadow x smile hug

  1. Date: 12/28/2013 11:24:00 AM
    You sure captured so much wonder here, nette! Sorry sa late reply, busted computer ko eh, and medyo tama ako using my phone, but yup gamit ko ngayon phone... I read you in HK. Have fun, basta ko gnaw daw dyan! Happy 2014 and hugs!

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    Date: 12/28/2013 11:24:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

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  1. Date: 12/28/2013 10:39:00 AM
    a very beautiful poem friend Nette :) Good luck in the contest. wishing you and your family a Merry Christmas and a Very happy New Year. Cheers!! :)

  1. Date: 12/28/2013 5:40:00 AM
    Enjoyed reading your contest entry..Winner for sure in my book..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

  1. Date: 12/27/2013 9:47:00 PM
    Hi Nette, A lovely seasonal write..Happy Holidays! ken

  1. Date: 12/27/2013 4:44:00 PM
    A beautiful look at Christmas through the eyes of a child, and written in your own unique style, wonderful words Nette...Peter

  1. Date: 12/27/2013 3:30:00 PM
    The wonder of Christmas from a child's point of view shines through but so does the deeper meaning, that we are all made of the same stuff and exist in many forms.You took this to a new level! Fairies and angels, totally unique!

  1. Date: 12/27/2013 1:56:00 PM
    To see innocence through a child's eyes is enchanting. This poem goes farther than ordinary realms of hope and symbolisms of things heavenly.Supreme, Nette

  1. Date: 12/27/2013 1:43:00 PM
    Nette, a wonderful poem... Thank you for blessing us with another Christmas poem... Late Christmas Hugs... xox... LINDA

  1. Date: 12/27/2013 12:14:00 PM
    I love the original line you created "Godmother Mary" you are a wizzardess my dear, and I too am grateful for your friendship and commitment to my reads, I appreciate you from the bottom of my heart to the top of my soul, big hugs xxx

  1. Date: 12/27/2013 8:54:00 AM
    Charming & beautifully created! I hope you had a wonderful Xmas! You are missed! =D

  1. Date: 12/27/2013 6:52:00 AM
    You have perfectly covered the desired and wishes of the children, nette

  1. Date: 12/27/2013 6:37:00 AM
    I hope you had a very awesome Christmas Nette! I didn't get the opportunity to wish you a Merry Christmas but I will right now wish you a great Happy New Year! This poem is full of Christmas magic, the kind only pixies and the Godmother Mary can bring! The child dreams of grandiosity and beauty that we can only wish we could imagine! But you captured the moment right here within your delectable poem my friend! What a gorgeous piece, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 12/27/2013 6:04:00 AM
    - Through the child's eyes ... magic ..... - Beautiful and gives me thoughts far back in time ... Hope Christmas was a nice time with your family, Nette. - Good luck in the contest! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 12/27/2013 5:37:00 AM
    The wonder of innocence coming from a child is so enchanting. I love this poem filled with magic and vibrant appeal. Have yourself a merry Christmas.Makes me feel like a child again!