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A Cheeky Little Ode To You, My Love

My love you are far Much hotter than stars, Your beauty brings light to my life. I really can't wait For that wonderous date When you finally become my wife. My mind has been blown By the love that you've shown, If only I'd known from the start. It's always been you, But I never knew That your feelings matched those of my heart. Now I think I need  to follow your lead  and head back to bed for a while.  When we both wake up next  we can send loads of texts  'bout our dreams that dissolve all those miles.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 3/8/2012 2:12:00 PM
Sweeeet Simon, like it alot. - oxox hugs form Norway
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Date: 2/25/2012 9:46:00 AM
Enjoyed this :) Very fluid
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Date: 2/25/2012 7:05:00 AM
Nice poem........Patrick
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