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A Butterfly Inside

I feel a butterfly inside; its wings are cramped within my breast. The weight of flesh, o dull cocoon, prohibits my free flight. At best I only soar inside; my wings-- gossamer, light, remain untried. I wait...I wait...until the day the barred' cage is flung aside and airy wings lift toward the skies. I have felt this graceful creature flutter faintly deep inside; then, at times, so ardently, I think no way will it abide! It will be loosed! Its wish to fly will push the bars of flesh aside. Determined is this butterfly to show its colors multiplied and wing its way through azure skies. The time is drawing near, I'm sure; the throbbing swells within my heart. The cumbrous cocoon, filled with life, is bursting now, falling apart. The butterfly is breaking free; no more its wings will tightly furl, but lightly spread upon the breeze their filmy webs, gilded and pearled... and, then, my soul will leave this world. Faye Lanham Gibson Copyright, 1987

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 6/8/2014 8:28:00 PM
Hi Faye, Congratulations, in Kelly's Butterfly Fluttering By.. Sweet move... LINDA
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Date: 6/8/2014 10:18:00 AM
This was so unique where it's you and you finally become what you' were meant to be... A beautiful winning poem. Congratulations on the win.
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Faye Gibson
Date: 6/8/2014 4:16:00 PM
Thanks, Carol. I am glad you found some merit in this poem.
Date: 6/8/2014 9:56:00 AM
Hi Faye, Loved the descriptive complexity of your excellent poem. Well done on your placement. Regards Theresa xx
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Faye Gibson
Date: 6/8/2014 4:15:00 PM
Thank you for your kind comments, Theresa
Date: 6/4/2014 5:56:00 PM
A beautiful poem Faye...Congrats on your win
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Date: 6/4/2014 7:09:00 AM
Congratulations, Faye on a great, big beautiful win!
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Date: 6/4/2014 6:49:00 AM
Very original, creative and unique take of the butterfly. Kudo's to you, Faye. bfn Elaine
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Date: 6/4/2014 6:41:00 AM
A truly great write and great win my friend. Big Congrats!!!
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Date: 6/4/2014 2:19:00 AM
Nicely done Faye...a fine poem and a fine win. How much was the prize money? lol
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Date: 6/4/2014 1:03:00 AM
Congrats on a fine win, Faye
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Date: 6/3/2014 10:09:00 PM
Wonderful n amazing write Faye ! feelings come alive in this one! congrats on top place !
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Date: 6/3/2014 8:13:00 PM
I loved everything about this poem, Faye. The expressiveness and the metaphors were excellent! This poem is going onto my favorites list! Congratulations on your first place win!
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Date: 6/3/2014 8:11:00 PM
A big wow, this is terrific. Congrats. BG
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Date: 5/19/2014 7:46:00 PM
A poem magnificently deep. Leading to the emerging beautiful ending!! Bravo!!!!!
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Date: 5/19/2014 5:13:00 PM
Faye, a wonderful poem... deep...SKAT
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